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    DENIAL THE PAIN OF WOMEN

    Relationships

    By Jacqueline Amos

    Denial wanting to be the savior,
    relationships that linger,
    wanting to change those things,
    that man must change for self,
    getting caught up being the victim,
    when love was the exchange.

    Women sometimes live in glass houses,
    wanting things to be the way they want,
    knowing in there hearts,
    that it is wrong,
    wanting to be loved, at what ever cost,
    lonely that lives on the door steps,
    Women who tries to capture love ,
    within eyes of someone’s pain.





    The pretense of being loved,
    and in pain, Betrayal of friendship,
    when friends try to steal one’s joy,
    is there loyalty, in this word called love?
    Is denial, when the pain is severe?

    Pretense that loves is there,
    tossing a turning all through the night.
    Crying to the lover, treat me right,
    when will truth set in.
    You are the fool to his wants and desires,
    Self cannot be protected,
    if there is no loyalty within ones on turf.

    Self-destruction, ready to explored,
    all the signs, denial as wide, as the river of the Nile,
    Women who give up their dignity and pride,
    for a moment of blind love.



    Why must love come with a price tag?
    Love is given freely said the lord.
    Anything you have to buy in the name of love,
    the price gets higher an higher,
    Self destruction is abomination to self,
    don’t make this chose,
    the temptation of the word love,
    and the middleman, who comes to steal your heart,
    say what I want to hear,
    feeling you with all the right desires,
    get you hook, and now you will be the victim,
    of his turf. Why do women love bad boys?





    Denial why must women prostitute there pride,
    castrating the emotions of love,
    it becomes the toxins of self,
    as the pain is substituted for love.

    A man that loves from the heart,
    he will give freely of his love,
    a women who must beg an buy,
    is the target of un-clean love.
    Listen as he speaks, was he gentle?
    Were his concerns about you?
    Did he ask you, your wants and dreams?
    Did he leave you a message?
    Telling you how he missed you?
    And wanted to see you again.

    Why is it hard for women to want a good man,
    why must bad be substituted for love,
    and the men who treat women like a queen,
    are dumped and pushed a side,
    psychological lynching always,
    wanting things that cause pain,
    and the man who feels the same pain.
    Reversed in love, happiness is the outcome to pain.





    Women must be humble,
    Grandma was right;
    women who are humble will be blessing,
    with the wisdom of life.
    Women must bring back the old traditions;
    the new is destructive, to the word called love.





    Copywriter 2002
     
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    gurl now u said a mouth full ........u keep right on talking
    coz i'm listening at ya
     
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    :toast: LIKE THAT
     
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    how right! how right this is!
     
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    This was a classic one how i remember this
     
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