Black Poetry : Demon Chase #3

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    The police escorted this low beast disquised as a man with a wise plan to steal the
    Seventh key from me, meanwhile I couldn’t be a slow poke and little of no hope of me
    Leaving this town, hunger felt threatened no longer regretting things I have done
    Because the demons are the underworld they wander and hurl evil I can’t just run
    Have to stand and fight so my plan must be right to hold onto the seventh key
    If I try duck everyone will become a by product of evil so I must remain free
    Because the evil anoint crews with different points of views but it all equal
    The feeble evil I’m competing with everything follows swift into a sequel
    Oh this is some great wine but what is his state of mind? I thought to myself
    “hey man you look hungry and lonely don’t wanna to be rude you want some stealth
    Food? Got a friend with a cafeteria her flavor blend is superior the price is right
    A nice delight in my mind I proceed to pray “ok lead the way it’s already night
    Hasd a sweaty appetite, they done a big cook we had pig foot so delicious began
    To get suspicious took the seventh and hid it under the table the drunk saw my hand
    And my raw plan of hiding could be revealed, meanwhile the little girl told the police
    How bizaare and whack that a man tried to carjack my daddy’s car and now no peace
    The little girl’s statement convinced and persuade the cops all I had was a blade and no
    Glock, but now I feel superior at the cafeteria in the correct zone eating neck bone yo
    I’m pigging out see a girl heart true and bless in a dark blue dress that caught my eye
    She could be my girlfriend galore now the sherrif and the demon came in the door try
    Hide, “hold it” my plan was scuffed by handcuffs this was the demon’s desire, fire in
    His eyes this diminished my attitude couldn’t finish my food handcuffs are rude begin
    To think, the demon speaks he has my key give it to me

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    Distinguish vet and know the first letter of the English
    Alphabet is A, rap vowels leave crap in bowels bring this
    And their **** to a halt, smoking clowns with spoken sounds
    On microphones I’m a psycho at home crazy walking around
    like Norman Bates looking for mother, misled fakes having
    heads shape like pears my bling strong like King Kong stabbing
    eyesights with shines twilights climbs to sparkles best buy
    some shades or be blind when you see my rhymes no lie
    parading with wisdom using a whack grading system recite
    the art of a fool and still get good marks in school my bike
    need a chain see fake rappers with heads the shape of apples
     
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    Demon Chase #3

    The police escorted this low beast disquised as a man with a wise plan to steal the Seventh key from me, meanwhile I couldn’t be a slow poke and little of no hope of me
    Leaving this town, hunger felt threatened no longer regretting things I have done
    Because the demons are the underworld they wander and hurl evil I can’t just run
    Have to stand and fight so my plan must be right to hold onto the seventh key
    If I try duck everyone will become a by product of evil so I must remain free
    Because the evil anoint crews with different points of views but it all equal
    The feeble evil I’m competing with everything follows swift into a sequel
    Oh this is some great wine but what is his state of mind? I thought to myself
    “hey man you look hungry and lonely don’t wanna to be rude you want some stealth
    Food? Got a friend with a cafeteria her flavor blend is superior the price is right
    A nice delight in my mind I proceed to pray “ok lead the way it’s already night
    Hasd a sweaty appetite, they done a big cook we had pig foot so delicious began
    To get suspicious took the seventh and hid it under the table the drunk saw my hand
    And my raw plan of hiding could be revealed, meanwhile the little girl told the police
    How bizaare and whack that a man tried to carjack my daddy’s car and now no peace
    The little girl’s statement convinced and persuade the cops all I had was a blade and no
    Glock, but now I feel superior at the cafeteria in the correct zone eating neck bone yo I’m pigging out see a girl heart true and bless in a dark blue dress that caught my eye
    She could be my girlfriend galore now the sherrif and the demon came in the door try
    Hide, “hold it” my plan was scuffed by handcuffs this was the demon’s desire, fire in
    His eyes this diminished my attitude couldn’t finish my food handcuffs are rude begin
    To think, the demon speaks he has my key give it to me

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    maymon fresh

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    Location: My middle leg love's to make the flock shout...May rhythm live long & pigeon's sing song-SagaSphinx posted Saturday, January 22, 2011 8:10:09 AM
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    i the potential in this
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    icy-mic

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    Location: canada posted Sunday, January 23, 2011 10:20:56 PM
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    yeah mine, im feeling all the demon chases...if you record them you should make an entire album based off of this story. Keep at it
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    *shapeless*

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    wut the **** just happened to my other "maymon fresh is a menstrating *****" post and YOUr other post ...that was called in that case or some **** that was a dude talking about hot women in the beginning then it turned into a girl writing the lyric about men...???? wtf?

    I liked this story line.....or reality...u r different....strange writes like Jexter
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    *shapeless*

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    Location: Bay Area Underground posted Monday, January 24, 2011 3:21:11 AM
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    it's there now....nevrmind...******* computers.
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    Dj Skitz

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    Location: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada posted Monday, January 24, 2011 3:43:13 AM
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    what was all that **** about a seventh key man??? i dunno i felt this pieace needed a lil work.. like you got skill it just seems yr wingin threw yr verse too fast... if ya took a lil more time on it woulda been iller... still wasnt bad though... 1
     
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