Black Poetry : DEMON CHASE #2

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DEMON CHASE #2

A car, I’m in this little town start to fiddle around, who left their dors unlock feel
Chase ain’t over the demons wants this seventh key my story go deep last night
No sleep have to acknowledge kindness the facts of garbage is blindness in fright
Demon’s stats are rude seven stars tattooed in the palm of my hand are aligned right
Demon chase is some sick hardcore slop and now I must pick a door lock to a car
Sprint for peace in the hood need a Gran Torino like Clint Eastwood the movie star
These demons fake and feeble must escape this evil and like an employee I recognize
Authority realize large majority of folks can’t see demons they flies in the wreck skies
Of sin and it all beginned after Christ died on the cross man’s pride was lost left to fight
Off devils, now whips out a pocket knife to pop a door lock try highjack a ride this is sick
And enrage, like Nicholas Cage try be gone in 60 seconds with a tricky weapon,
stick Shift on the floor, don’t trust this block just as I was about to bust the lock this little
Girl walks up, “what are you doing to my dad’s car?” oh dang “daddy daddy” middle
Of my mission had to hall butt can’t stay around on this playground her dad was pissed
Nothing as bad as this I ran away my plan was on delay hid behind a building I missed
My chance want wine do some chilling and think my next move, now a drunk walks up
Out of no where, “ have a sip?” Grabbed, grip the bottle drunk it all no need for a cup
Now letting my head clear I can feel the demons getting near the drunk had an extreme
Smile and meanwhile the cops had located the wreckage they started rapping on the scene
“holy **** how did this happen? Must stay brief hey chief run these license plates OK
Wow both cars are stolen” Not one body founded, now the demons come their way
From the burning wreckage, not human a freak inside started to speak with pride “hey
Sheriff that’s my car, acting like a whack clown said “I’m trying to track down
a criminal” His voice cold and damp he acted like a bold tramp fake his no renown
Promise in his sayings he said some dumb stuff now the police says come with us
The police was trying to crack a case they came to the exact place I was starting a fuss
The police escorted this low beast disquised as a man with a wise plan to steal the
Seventh key from me, meanwhile I couldn’t be a slow poke and little of no hope of me
Leaving this town

http://www.network54.com/Forum/1198...+ON+B-BOYS+SUCK+STEAL+RHYMES+FROM+BLACK+FOLKS
 
Lets face it PREYING MANTIS , METHODIC AND URBAN ESIKIMO are white misfits with no comeback skills look if these white misfits turned to stone they still wouldn’t sculptured figures, and PREYING MANTIS is a white boy with a stifling odor that came from sucking black penises and jacking off reading my rhymes in his sig and methodic is just a place holder like zero he adds nothing but cow manure to the site now being white is not all that, and URBAN ESKIMO is a loser that can only post one verse a year when he does post he bites CALFSKIN’S rhymes like that MAIN INGREDIENT POST, tyhese white boys kills AMERICA and fulfil the character of a bunch of white ape ***** with mop hair and pale skin, these white boys are bad maedicine the whackos fail to act on their own headache which is stupidity word up

http://www.b-boys.com/forums/showthread.php?t=14124 a white boy stealing rhymes from black folks
 
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Demon Chase #2

A car, I’m in this little town start to fiddle around, who left their dors unlock feel
Chase ain’t over the demons wants this seventh key my story go deep last night
No sleep have to acknowledge kindness the facts of garbage is blindness in fright
Demon’s stats are rude seven stars tattooed in the palm of my hand are aligned right
Demon chase is some sick hardcore slop and now I must pick a door lock to a car
Sprint for peace in the hood need a Gran Torino like Clint Eastwood the movie star
These demons fake and feeble must escape this evil and like an employee I recognize
Authority realize large majority of folks can’t see demons they flies in the wreck skies
Of sin and it all beginned after Christ died on the cross man’s pride was lost left to fight
Off devils, now whips out a pocket knife to pop a door lock try highjack a ride this is sick
And enrage, like Nicholas Cage try be gone in 60 seconds with a tricky weapon, stick Shift on the floor, don’t trust this block just as I was about to bust the lock this little
Girl walks up, “what are you doing to my dad’s car?” oh dang “daddy daddy” middle
Of my mission had to hall butt can’t stay around on this playground her dad was pissed
Nothing as bad as this I ran away my plan was on delay hid behind a building I missed
My chance want wine do some chilling and think my next move, now a drunk walks up
Out of no where, “ have a sip?” Grabbed, grip the bottle drunk it all no need for a cup
Now letting my head clear I can feel the demons getting near the drunk had an extreme
Smile and meanwhile the cops had located the wreckage they started rapping on the scene
“holy **** how did this happen? Must stay brief hey chief run these license plates OK
Wow both cars are stolen” Not one body founded, now the demons come their way
From the burning wreckage, not human a freak inside started to speak with pride “hey
Sheriff that’s my car, acting like a whack clown said “I’m trying to track down a criminal” His voice cold and damp he acted like a bold tramp fake his no renown
Promise in his sayings he said some dumb stuff now the police says come with us
The police was trying to crack a case they came to the exact place I was starting a fuss
The police escorted this low beast disquised as a man with a wise plan to steal the Seventh key from me, meanwhile I couldn’t be a slow poke and little of no hope of me
Leaving this town


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01-13-2011, 03:47 AM #2 (permalink)
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dam yo u stretch ya lines all the way out haha,,,crazy but i finally was able to read it ..
i think u have talent but try to shorten ya bars a lil...they are to long
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01-13-2011, 09:05 AM #3 (permalink)
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i get it you just gotta read it faster dumbass....
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01-13-2011, 11:17 AM #4 (permalink)
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Not sure if I like this one better than the 1st.
Gonna have to go thru them again.

this part got me though.


Quote:
Now letting my head clear I can feel the demons getting near the drunk had an extreme
Smile and meanwhile the cops had located the wreckage they started rapping on the scene
“holy **** how did this happen? Must stay brief hey chief run these license plates OK
Wow both cars are stolen” Not one body founded, now the demons come their way
From the burning wreckage, not human a freak inside started to speak with pride “hey
Sheriff that’s my car, acting like a whack clown said “I’m trying to track down a criminal” His voice cold and damp he acted like a bold tramp fake his no renown



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01-14-2011, 10:08 AM #5 (permalink)

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thanks for the props on this one for real
 

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