Black Poetry : dem mokofo's are devils

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  1. PurpleMoons

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    I tell ya, peace have never been so good.
    all the windows open...a sharp crisp breeze tickeling my senses.
    The sun shining brightly on my head...feeding me my shot of vitamin D's.
    And sounds. Those beautiful sounds of natural things just whispering
    hidden songs to my membranes.
    I tell ya, peace have never been so good!

    I can laydown when I want to. Eat when and what I want to.
    Watch whatever I want to. Go anywhere I want to.
    Just do anything I want to. Going from the porch to the bed.
    From the porch to the bed. Not a worry in the world.
    I tell ya, peace aint never been so good.

    Then it happened! Like an LP needle scratching the
    surface of a vinyl record then coming to a complete halt.
    The chaotic chitter chatter of squeaky high pitched voices
    arguing back and forth. Three different frequencies raging and
    seeking answers all at one time. Loud thumps assaulting
    the tranquility of the hardwood floors. Even the walls are beginning
    to close in. Whereas before, they were like a hollow shell laced with
    all the comforts of a luxurious penthouse on the 100th floor of cloud 69.
    Whinning...crying, should be Oscar nominated best supporting drama
    actresses in the motion picture of life. Even the "flowering plant" leaves
    are drooping.:confused:
    Not to mention, the mosquitoes have also returned.
    Dem mokofo's are devils!

    Out of nowhere the air became thick and humid.
    And where in hell did that pocket of heat come from.
    I can see the rotors on the fan propelling, but where is the cool breeze.
    My once laid back hair is reaching for all ends of the earth.
    (North, South, East, and West.) I can't even hear myself thinking.:em2300:

    Wheeew! Them mokofo's are some minature little devils!
    Just to think, moments before their arrival I was missing them sorely.
    Peace aint never been so good and lonely! It was so good, I wanted to
    share it with somebody. :SuN030:
    Wheew! Be careful of what you wish for.:bully:

    Dem mokofo's are devils!
    But they sho is funny! Make my heart rate speed up.....AND.....I'm
    sure glad they're home.:car: :lol:

    :heart:
     
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    You're attention to detail is very crisp, Purple. As I read this, I thought of those rare times when my kids were young, and I had the house to myself. When they returned, well, the mini vacation, was over, but...I did miss them. Such is life, huh? Very much enjoyed, and don't make us wait so long next time, ok? :)
     
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    Oh gosh, Sister Watz! I'm about to get me another mini vacation. This time
    for only a few hours instead of a whole day. They came home to be with me on my b-day, so the treat is on me tonight. LOL

    Atleast, I get to a couple of hours more away from the even smaller crumbsnatchers. smh It's like that famous saying they used about relationships, "You can't live with them and you can't live without them."

    Yep, such is life! How they can make me smile yet shatter my peace at
    the same time, I guess I'll never really understand that one.
    It is what it is!:SuN030:

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    Oh yes Goddess Auset! Pray for me! :lol:

    :heart:
     
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    my words would not suffice............

    :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    Da maze of life upon peace kinda remind me of my delights
    seeking peace somewhere alone
     
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    Nice

    PurpleMoons

    You outlined details so well in this flow.
    I enjoyed the way you descibe the silence busting chatter, the fan blades turning and the heat.
     
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    yes the are the devil PM

    and yes yes yes

    always be careful of what you wish for because you might just get it!

    lol

    great to see you on side this (upstairs) lol

    peace
     
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    Straight from the mouth of an unconditional MOM!! ...ya can't get rid of them, they're all up in ya head. I guess it's safe to say, we can admit it..or deny it but ...
    They are the AIR we breath...you just prove that :lol:
     
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