Black Poetry : Delta Dawn

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Nov 2, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shadow government emerging

    Inaugurated in '63

    Grassy knoll evolving

    MLK, way dead Kennedys

    A toast is now in order

    New world odor rank ~

    The stench of decline

    What a boon to evil

    Either party bring the devil to dine

    Confrontation in the making

    Fallen angels too embattled to fly

    Heaven's sky is falling

    Pomp and ceremoniously few die

    Delta dawn the new equation

    Beastly signs of god awful times

    In blood red fair and unbiased

    Henchmen talking heads

    Along party lines

    Troopers storming all around US

    Seconds from the 2nd coming of Christ


    Darryl Abdu Omari :hearthis:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da delta dawn of hope and christ live
    dis was very nicely done 1poet..........
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is poppin, brothah. I am scared sh*tless about the election tomorrow
     
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    love this flow.....
    peace
    Angel
     
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    I must say that I didn't quite understand all this piece was saying but I liked what I did understand and I also liked the way this piece flows. Flow on!
     
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    ...these are some
    unnerving times we
    livin in...

    I swear this piece...
    just gripped me
     
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    Yes brothers and sisters, put on the full armour of God.
     
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