Black Poetry : Deliver odds like river gods stuff floats in quotes

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deliver odds like river gods stuff floats in quotes
    Even flip boats and rip throats, best stay off oceans of hopes
    These boss potions promotes violence, fake rappers are like
    Baked apples they sweet I play and eat their verses out of spite
    Defeat all curses when I write, smoke pipes on dope nights
    Cats plots false gets tossed while mine hot sauce with fish and wine
    Will twist a mind, arrive fruitless deprived ruthless and this is online
    Hot do with a world of clout it shouts like motto of girl scouts
    Twirl routes leave crook in roads hook with a load of flavor like trout
    Fried, in my stout ride about to glide down town and shop for toy
    Chick oh boy tricks are slick they thrill bold but eat my billfold like soy
    Beans, and that destroy my esteem so a thug in the club with extreme
    Caution, hate hassles from fake rascals stay at my money in green //
    From a family of good heart thugs but need spark plugs
    For my fun bike so it run right, left home deft and alone loves
    The Auto Zone
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Write scripts major on a slip of paper end up a clever letter

    To whack cats stack stats like wood, good nouns sound better

    Cats soft like cardboard I try hard but ignored it I’m floored

    Like Roy Jones, should be adored strong mind being explored

    Like new land need a new plan in order to plow ground

    Somehow a clown get more props than I, can only frown

    Quotes earthly but noteworthy like reference books I’m down

    By law having a renowned flaw with rap, best return to my hometown
     
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    Float On, Brother MADD! :witch:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    droppin madd skills on the lyrical beat that's sweet.......
    flow head on bruh !
     
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    hey madd
    i've come and taken more than a peep....I came because you gave me the first true critique of my work and i thank you for that...(i'll reply to that at my generational piece)
    I came to take in the rhythmical rhyming form that you so cleverly do...i must admit it always takes me a moment , with this form. to take it all in..i usually get a feeling ..a sense of something...like the title (which I love)
    one of the reasons I don't always respond..i don't know what to say...except
    i like the music and the power of a line encompassing every essence ...
    I'll keep reading..and will start responding...
    as madd as you rapp...you are clear...
    thanks
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ALL RIGHT THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL YO
     
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    Gifted with the pen and the mic
    Telling a story when u write
    Stringing us from the left to the right
    Head butting harder then a Evaner Holifield fight
    Man im starting to wonder how u sleep at night
    Knowledge exhibited bringing us into the light
    All we can see in the middle of the night is your nikes
    Your pen bringing sparks on the page in the night
    Ah man its just you though i had to fight
    hahahahaha yea right
    intill we met again in the next piece you write.....

    Ase'

    :spinstar:Soulja:spinstar:
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading and the props on this one for real yall
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight as hell.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS ON THIS ONE FOR REAL YALL
     
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