Black Poetry : DELICIOUSLY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Everything is eaten
    for your benefit dearest
    come eat me
    put your lips to mines
    tis yours alone
    that sweetens like nectar
    oh how my heart thirst
    for thy kisses
    so I shall dreameth of thee
    my ripe nectarine of love
    i so tonight prayer on my lips
    that i may dream luridly of you
    and behold da taste that's
    deliciously
     
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    my precious love
    i can barely write
    my ripe nectarine quivering so
    with desire, and rest assured
    i will eat and savor the taste
    of all that you are and have
    for everything about you to me is
    unbelievably and deliciously sweet

    (smile)
     
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    Behold da devine love
    ya sweetness i nibble
    for a lasting taste
    ye beloveth like da ripple
    of fine wine upon my lip
    ya blackberry of passion
    I taken you as my
    chocolate cake
    let me just eat
    da deliciously maple
     
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    wHOA! wORD! WORD!

    Y'all did your thing on this piece! Dats Wassup!