Black Poetry : DEJA VU

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **contains excerpts from Dionne Warwick's "Deja Vu."

    Deja Vu...
    Washed over me.
    The color steeped
    from a dark Cerulean to
    ridiculous Midnight Azure.
    "Have we met before?"
    I sit
    at the table,
    sun shiny day at a corner
    cafe.
    Feeling the breeze and the gentle sway.
    Deja Vu
    interrupts my drink of
    creamy cafe au lait,
    With the words he says.
    It was completely insane,
    all you did was say hello.
    It was like a different space and
    time, yet you were in front of me
    and I failed to remember the exact date,
    and rhyme.
    You spoke and I listened,
    faithful student to sage.
    Deja Vu and I rumbaed on
    beryl dreams that took on a
    chartreuse shade and when you held me
    I was captivated in dark scarlet and puce flow.
    Deja Vu moved me up and down and the image of
    this brought me far and beyond.
    Somewhere back, their I lost myself and took him
    on.
    I embraced Deja Vu and flew,
    Higher....
    Higher...
    Higher....

    ~Copyright 2004
    Lady Yang's Jade" Publishing
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well written and presented, your style is quite nice, I liked this piece.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was posed very well
    i enjoyed this read very much
    thanks for sharing

    Angel
     
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    this was truly beautiful
    you brought me into your setting
    and i became one with your flow
    of DEJA VU
    flow it poet :)
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u really out doing ya self tyte drop wow!
    lovin all dis deja vu
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaahh, yes...
    an Evening with Deja Vu...
    guaranteed to be interesting...
    Love the Vibe you placed within this peace...
    It flowed seamlessly... :toast:
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmm the sweetness of poet's all vibin on one accord! Thats the delicious aroma in my atmosphere. I love you all and I thank you for making me feel so gorgeous and wonderful. Love
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, this was nice and smooth, poet. Keep flowing
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such an ease to this flow, I tried to "see" all the different hues you brought to this. Keep flowing poet.
     
  10. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jazzy and Watz thank you both for your beauty! God bless you both greatly.
     
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