Black Poetry : Define the Boundary Line

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, May 1, 2003.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There isn't a day that goes by
    That I don't think about you
    In my stomach I get butterflies
    If only you knew
    I'm going away
    And I don't know what to do
    And am not quite sure what to say
    Because I can't explain
    Why I feel this way
    I can' see because it's pouring rain
    Why do you lie?
    Why can't you make time?
    Could you just tell me why
    Define the boundary line
    I miss the old version of a wonderful guy
    I finally see the sign
    The reason why
    You can't be mine
    Now I've moved on
    And we barely talk anymore
    That's a true shame John
    We were bestfriends before
    And now everything is gone
    Because our friendship is broken down to the core
    I'm thankful for the time we shared
    I truly did love you
    But now I think you never cared
    And now there's nothing left that either of us can do

    One_Love
     
  2. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum, thas sad. a good poem though.sorta reminds me of a situation im in.......keep expressin those feelins...........much love :)
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    this is a good poem. agree with sarcasm4eva.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u well felt i've been their saw dat
    keep expressing let da ink drop
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling the emotion in this one.
     
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