Black Poetry : DeFeat

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Defeat
    Dafine
    drowning
    droped
    devil
    deem
    damper
    delight
    dreams
    dead aim
    death

    yet
    love
    hope
    faith
    livin
    light
    shinning
    upon the
    sorrow
    the tears
    dry
    river flow
    defeated
    the myth
    of it
    still
    thou worry
    of a lost
    but define
    truth in da
    reality

    I rise , i rise
    in da path of
    reasons
    i know there is
    peace in da
    valley for me . :crying:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thou worry
    of a lost
    but define
    truth in da
    reality



    speechless
    i can feel this flow
    and relate
    deep drop
    :grouphug: love ya
    Peace will come

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel
    indeed in da valley is a place for me
    i will reach there by faith and hope
    peace sistah
     
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    tru indeed god tru indeed....
    i felt this piece
    because inside of all of us
    resides peace
    one love
    khasm
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH,
    yet another flow on overcoming negativity with positivity hope and faith
    ecouraging write......
    We all need boosting from time to time.......

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Khasm & Rasheed
    indeed the light always on
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like how you did that. I like that piece a lot I think I am becoming a fan.
     
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    aweeeeeeeeeeee
    thank u so much
    welcome the $$RICH$$ FAN CLUB
    LOL
     
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    Da feat is not 2 be defeated.

    Completely feel U on this, bruh.

    Nice.
     
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    Rising up from that defeated feeling, triumphantly. I loved the creative way you penned this.
     
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