Black Poetry : Deeply Non Sensible

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  1. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    Deeply Non Sensible.......making no sense but still stimulating minds
    Two hands ten toes ashy knees and elbows needing lotion
    Something to soothe acting like a potion to tha notion of a stifiled life
    I thought twice why tha light was bright
    I bought rice to eat nice at night
    Wit a knife and pipe I'm cutting tha smoke n mirrors
    Happy go lucky cheerers cheerlead for this ill breed..... a ill seed
    Who needs a can of spinach like Popeye
    I pop eyes..growing stronger daily thur scripts
    I do dips.......mental flips spitting deeply non sensiblel sh*t from tha soul
    Hand me two more bowls this time give me less milk
    I gotta sift thru tha bull to come up on a jewel
    Living life wit no rules....... I couldnt survive in school
    Had to be a rebel.
    Had to earn a medal of honor badge
    Watching how kismet n karma drag........on.........at the grocery line I bag strong
    Soul thick like triple ply tissue
    I'm just spitting wut comes to mind
    Being deeply non sensiblel is tha issue.



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all snap and pop dis was fire and tyte poet !
     
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    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks my brotha

    much luv


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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Deeply

    Very nice!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this...
     
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    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    thank u sistahs! :)
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Love this some of my friends consider me random and I agree butI think its a beautiful thing and this poem is proof that not knowing what to say is a good no a beautiful thing.
     
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