Black Poetry : Deeply Indebted to Her

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my tooth ache's and ache's for this girl

    and it hurts badly enough to tempt me to curl

    around another sweetie pie when i'm lonely

    if only

    the thought of which didn't make me realize

    that without her my surface lies

    at the bottom of our Indian Ocean

    where hope cries

    for her lovely eyes

    to appreciate me



    love,

    howard
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, we already know that a substitute just will not do, it is her eyes you want looking into yours.
     
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