Quiet Poetry Lounge : Deeper

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Feather, Sep 13, 2011.

  1. Feather

    Feather Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deeper than my light shade of black skin​
    deeper than my flirtatious grin​
    deeper than my lip gloss glistening​
    deeper than the seat of my jeans​
    and in between​
    deeper than my soft, naked voice​
    deeper than my sweet scent
    deeper than your trance from smelling it
    deeper than your choice​
    to go deeper than where your mind roams​
    go deeper to know
    the love​
    of​
    my soul
     
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    Beautiful
     
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    well...you know...i could go deeper...once in between...but...that would be so...mean.:)

    just a thing.

    the river floweth.
     
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    its getting hot in here... :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I looked deeper inside yo amber
    went deeper down between like da hammer
    envision joy yet unseen what a slammer
    roam deeper from my daydream bam-mer
    heard ya nude voice in soft melodies
    as u floss deeper like a candy treats
    when deeper then choices of smiles
    to partake upon da glist of gloss
    i could go deeper then any hot summer day
    wit a flirtation sensual play
    oh i can be deeper
    guess i'm da sleeper shhhhh! hush!
    as i go deeper inside ya gentle soul
    to know ya
    Heart
     
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    Feather Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :cool: cool flow
     
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