Black Poetry : deeper

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Jan 19, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    i love you queen..

    no, let me get this right
    you have to feel what i'm saying...

    i
    go
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    per
    out of
    myself
    wh
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    i think
    of how
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    helplessly
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    called love.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    j'h

    man i know what u mean
    fall on and break a leg
    coz dis thing call love is grand
    i stay in love someway or another:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
  3. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very good: keep writing!!
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah

    Your Queen will surely adore this piece.... it's beautiful! :wink:


    N2
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feel me??

    thanx for reading me.

    jh.
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JP.


    yeah... i feel ya, lil brother!!

    all the way to the depths of my soul... but
    then again... we just love deeper like dat!
    it's a family trait!! :)

    NL.
    SunShyne~
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    too much SunShyne over the garden so

    i'm getting my versaces :cool:

    glad you feeling me and this bottomless love.
    we meet there often...

    oh yeah, why didn't you eat one of mama biscuits girl?

    peace be
    &
    NL,
    jh.
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah,

    I'm feeling this~
    enjoyable read. Thanks


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J!

    I'm Lovin this hea joint! I feel you on this! I'm fallin & tryin not to land on the arrow in my *** where Cupid shot me, cause I feel like the Jones will only get worse...lol

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    all i have to say is


    I LOVEDIDED THIS

    the art man


    DSS
     
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