Quiet Poetry Lounge : Deeper than the heart

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, May 31, 2008.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dedicated to my love
    Love travels miles
    Love does not have to touch to drive
    It's in the air
    It's everywhere in your life
    Give up the fear
    Know this my dear
    I am for real!




    I am not afraid of seriously upsetting my life​

    The hour has come to make concrete changes

    The time is now
    To place those who mean
    So much to me up front
    Make them first
    Make them all they mean to me

    I could fall in love with girl like you.

    I would never tire of the things you do
    Each story you tell is so refreshing
    No matter how many times they are told by you
    You don’t add, or take away
    But to me they seem brand new

    Sparks in the air
    I feel them
    I know you do too

    Inside I desire to consummate with you
    I feel I could accomplish things
    Succeed in a relationship with you

    Tell me do you feel the same?

    Remember when you told me what you have
    Is all mine!
    I hesitated for it wasn’t the right time

    I was with another
    I was just getting to know who you were
    I regret we didn’t consummate the love in that time we shared

    Like a formality
    Get the formalities out of the way
    So we can see much clearer where we are headed in this affair

    I want you now….

    I feel you understand
    You accept me like I am
    You know the depth of me
    You enjoy me
    Make me your man

    Words so simple
    Say them again
    I love you _ I love you

    Things can start out simple
    Blossom to more than a friend

    I am going to let you drive
    I trust you with our lives
    I gain , I gain I do

    You stir me up like spoon in a cup
    People can tell how you feel about me
    I saw it from Jump Street you see
    Living life

    Hold me like a mother would hold her child
    I feel so melded
    You repair me
    You put me together
    You put me first
    You restore
    You improve
    You mend
    You help me recover
    In your arms like I’m a child
    I always knew that someone should
    It has to be you to be good.

    You know I am straight forward
    So I am going to lay things on the line
    I do love _ I do really love you
    Now and I will love you thru all time
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully written to a love that means so much , flow right on brother let her heart know of yours
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my goodness, the was such a genuinely warm flow, a love this deep she must already know. Do flow on poet.
     
  4. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A melodious piece of work poet
     
  5. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    heartfelt brah

    hope she c's what i c ......... :)
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOOO!!!

    You better Stop that Playing around and Get on that Knee!!!! LOL

    Tell it like it is!!!!!!
    Flow On Brother HODEE:D
     
  7. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes brethren

    feeling that spirit

    can't be mad at cha!
     
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