Black Poetry : Deeper Still

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can get deeper still, because strong is my will and I will not quit until I've had my fill, if you're reading or listening just relax and chill and let Brian bring you deeper still.
    Flashes of memory send me to the righteous elements of the seventh power, every minute every hour I hunger and thirst for this creative power to invade my consciousness, blessings to the highest I wouldn't hesitate to try this now bow down to your highness.

    I can get deeper still, and show you what I coose to be I will, I am the master of my reality, the ruler of my trinity, the me, myself, and I , to neglect God would be to lie, and these lips were meant for only kissing, if I were to go you would be missing...me, in all of my luxury, confidence directs potentiality, and I will never take no as my answer.

    I can get deeper still drown oceans in my deepness of the knowledge that elevates us to higher places, black people don't hide your faces, and never settle for less than your mother told you you can get, I say you ain't seen nothing yet, my palate has just begun to wet, baby remember Brian and don't ever forget.

    I can go deeper still, like bottomless pits on sunk ships or chapped lips bleeding for some cocoa butter, deeper than the lowest gutter, and deeper still than holy mothers praying for lost children, I am Brian and I'm building, transforming, resounding the warning, and poetically assainating with the lyrical swarming, getting hot like global warming, and more vicious than child support running after broke men.

    I can go deeper still, deeper than the center of the nile, let me wade in the water for a while, there is danger in the smile, so don't think that I am playing, instead heed the words that I am saying, and spraying like rounds of ammunition, I am taking no hostages my brothas are you listening? I am deeper than than I told you, more deadly than I showed you, will shank you as I hold you if you play me over, I am the thorn below your shoulder, I am the itch you can't reach, the child you can't teach, and the peace that's been breached, and you wonder why Brian is so deep?

    I am deeper still, deeper than you will ever see, a clone cannot be as good as me, and if belief escapes the cognitive rationale, then I bid thee stay awhile, and watch carefully as I slowly drown you in the deepness of me.

    Caramelpython 2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    already then dig dat...
    my brother off the hook up in here with this...
    pen hot..i just stop and stand back..
    and watcha work...
    but ummmm play nice....
    keep ya hands to ya self....
    and no yellin...lol

    work it CP
    :angel1: was here...wooo
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big up on dis one ya pen droppin it
    str8 tyte like dat !!
    bring it on
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was hot... got a chick wondering mr. caramelpython.. deeper than the sea.. drowning in your ocean of words... :)
     
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    oh my goodness
    had to get a sip of water
    on this here :hot: flow
    wow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all, I am pleased that I have found this place (TY Blkangel ) I am looking foward 2 working on a piece or 2 with some of you. But remember...... I can get "DEEPER STILL" (smile)
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CP your welcome..
    glad you enjoy your new home...:angel1:
    always your best friend...Angel
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a perfect place to lay my dome of thoughts. :devil:
     
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    This ws MAGNIFICANT!

    THREE SNAPS AND A HAND CLAP! THIS WAS OUT OF
    THIS WORLD FANTASTIC, BOMBASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bomb:

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :love: thanks alot it pleases me to know someone felt my vibe out here. :rolling:
     
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