Black Poetry : DEEP

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Sep 10, 2006.

  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading while it was posted
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate to the deepness of this piece poet..well said.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeper in deepness of this i can feel u here
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweettee:
    The depth of this piece is DEEP. Another
    awesome scribe sista.

    Much Luv
     
  5. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU TO THE FAM FOR CHECKIN OUT THIS PIECE, I AM GLAD I COULD STRIKE "DEEP" EMOTIONS WITH THIS FLO
    SWEETTEE29, LOVE
     
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    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "PLUNGING INTO UNSEEN PLEASURES"

    I really love that line.
    it gives the imagery of
    being blindfolded while
    anticipation overwhelms


    nice write


    SmoovV
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U made it hot!!!!!
    Made it blowtorch hot!!!!!
    :welldone: :welldone:
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    written for that one and only

    nothing wrong with that poet

    MY PSYCHE HAS HAD TO WEAR PROTECTION

    dang that is very deep


    peace

    get yours poet
    and i hope they are worthy
     
  9. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SMOOV , SWEET BABY FACE, AND DA STREET SO'JA THANK ALL OF YOU FOR CHECKIN THIS PIECE OUT I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKED THIS IS A LITTLE PIECE OF ME

    THANK YOU SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    I like this one.....it gets sensual, without being obvious.....there is a feminity here that is refreshing....a depth beyond the physical, as you say....

    a truly deep write...enchanting, very sexy.......without being tacky....that is truly a art.
     
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