Quiet Poetry Lounge : Deep Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GeorgeM, Apr 28, 2008.

  1. GeorgeM

    GeorgeM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep Thoughts




    My thoughts are like….

    Whipped cream and strawberries,

    All over, from the front, from behind,

    Stimulating your body

    As well as your mind

    Candles and oils,

    Lotions and toys,

    Massaging,

    Caressing,

    Undressing,

    Loving and feeling,

    Spoken words, silent kisses,

    Hushed ecstasy

    Deep

    The thoughts that travel through this gray matter of mine,

    Let’s just say they are one of a kind

    Compare them to the shining sun.

    Giving life and warmth.

    Or like a light directed through a prism,

    See how that turns into a rainbow?

    That’s right…many different colors

    But only one essence

    Light can be split to make color

    Black is the essence from which all color comes

    Deep

    Hear the sound of a silver utensil tapped

    Against a crystal glass

    Reverberating throughout your being

    Touching your soul

    Massaging your spirit

    Deep into my mind is what you’re seeing

    Sharing innermost thoughts is what you’re feeling

    They are as precious as crystals…

    Know the value of crystals?

    Jade, moonstone, rose quartz, amethyst

    Tiger-eye, opal, diamonds and lapis

    Thoughts as illuminating as the full moon’s glow,

    The deeper they get the deeper the flow

    And just like the moon,

    They wane,

    They wax,

    They retreat

    Yet they come back

    I am an island all my own

    Sitting alone surrounded by turbulent waters

    Having private conversations with these thoughts,

    They run deep

    Intriguing yet stimulating as if an epiphany

    Finely strung and tuned like violins in a bittersweet symphony

    Deep

    They get Deep

    They get even Deeper




    George M – [email protected] 2004
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved the images you penned all through this piece, images that are warm and welcoming, images that intrigue all of our senses. Yes, that was deep alright. Superb write.
    Welcome to Destee.com. Please aquaint yourself with our Forum Rules, as well as our rules of Poetic Etiquette. Please make yourself at home, because you are. Looking forward to reading more from you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    somehow i know all so well of these kinda deep thoughts that runs free
     
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    My Brother -you- are an ill writer.

    My writing hand is itching to write what you have written.

    As a Brother with too deep thoughts, this was felt not in my heart - but in my deep thoughts. Thank you so much for strengthening me.

    One.

    - Ikoro
     
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