Quiet Poetry Lounge : Deep Sea Diver (n2 Her... Again)

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  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I leapt
    from a cliff
    leaving the
    solid surface
    of earth
    out on faith
    velocity
    brought me
    giddiness
    and a question...?

    will her cool waters
    accept
    my invasion ?

    mid-air
    P
    L
    U
    N
    G
    I
    N
    G
    toward the surface
    of her words
    I hit the ocean
    gaining access
    to her
    wisdom
    a nictitating membrane
    guides me to her
    depths
    lost in

    D
    E
    S
    C
    E
    N
    T

    I glide deeper
    she speaks
    ancient sea salt
    Atlantis language
    lost
    I'm seeking her
    cypher
    as she seeps
    beneath my skin....

    approaching her
    abyssal plain
    it shifts
    and draws me
    to dwell
    on the swell
    of her tide
    pulled by
    planetary bodies
    she's got me
    hanging above
    her rotation
    waiting for escaping
    jewels
    to spin
    my way...

    I start to display
    signs of
    oxygen
    decay...
    gasping
    craving
    the specialized
    molecular composition
    of her

    d i c t a t i o n

    she
    surrounds my
    contracting e s s e n c e
    this nexus
    to my own
    depths...A G A I N
    I die
    a thousand deaths...
    for the
    PEARL
    of her
    text...

    so
    I endure certain torture...

    where mindseye
    meets dryland
    where
    SUN-SOUL
    sees
    your
    last inscription
    in blacksand....


    ~ HERE LIES " PRECIOUS PEARLS "...FOR A WISEMAN ~

    ...and so I


    D

    I

    V

    E


    ....again.




    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsyman,

    nice nice piece brother. smoothed out over a Grover washington vibe. "10"

    one love,blak
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha...

    You gon' have a sista catchin' a red-eye flight to Dallas... Just let me know if you're in north or south D?? :lol:

    Truly an exceptional piece ... I'm gon' have to marinate on this one for a minute... but I'll be back atcha' with more of me for you to reckon with! :wink:

    One :heart: + mo' :heart:
     
  4. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HUH ??

    i DONT BELIEVE IT..N2 WITH NO RETURN VOLLEY ?? I AM DEEPLY
    HURT.....

    *LEAPING FROM A CLIFF*:lol:

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's definitely not the case...

    I'm in between my motorcycle riding... just stopped in the house for some of my poetry fill.....and this got me hooked!

    You know I gotz love 4 you though! Don't you worry sugah! I got you!

    :heart:
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy

    and......Don't leap off that cliff just yet......


    (don't be hurt either)... ha ha ~ I usually don't make promises... but this one is an exception....

    I promise I will return the "serve" back to you... so we can keep the match going!

    In tennis... isn't this called "LOVE" ?? :lol:
     
  7. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hMMMMMMM

    *awaiting your re-turn* ....4 NOW THOUGH....."Advantage Gypsyman"...

    :shades:

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I entered into a small
    orifice --beneath the
    thickness of his brown
    skin ...to soak up
    compl(him)ments

    I've become
    absorbed in
    pores that perspire
    admiration
    covered with fluid
    creativity
    as my secrets
    move in through him

    ~ Rediscovering origins ~

    I read passages
    from his life line
    imparting my own

    Willing -ly
    transferring
    understanding
    love
    and respect with ease
    using
    cell mem(brain)es
    until we form
    connective tissUe
    that heals
    mental wounds

    As he reads
    the first page from
    the sealed book of
    "N" Theory
    I saw his boiling
    point risING
    under normal
    atmospheric pressure
    and I watched
    Gypsys' Celsi(us)
    temperature
    as it climbed
    N2 stimulation
    of vernacular sins

    Our intellectual
    capacity
    ingests structured
    thoughts
    from within

    Transluscent
    Soul-Stains
    from imported
    libretto

    ... And so
    I exit from his
    pores of poetry
    leaving
    him to balance
    on the
    curvuture of my
    collective ideas
    that rotate
    along the axis
    of concupiscence

    A man who
    has intercepted
    my diencephalon
    and I .... his

    Within his blood-words
    I will
    forever be
    consumed
    known only to
    him as
    ~ The cypher
    beneath
    his skin ~
     
  9. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got me....4 now

    I must aplogize 4 just getting 2 ur response....have been very very busy out there in the "physical" I must "marinate" now and immerse myself in your last cypher to respond with the honor and respect due...give me a sec....Your peice is "next level"...once again !

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!!!!

    U DONE IT AGAIN BRUTHA
    A MASTERPIECE~~~~~~
     
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