Black Poetry : Deep Rap

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Aug 6, 2004.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep Rap

    Drink wines but like a stink swine on route with my snout
    To root up trees and boot corrupt MC’S with bad clout out
    The game, search much to find rhymes and loose money
    Being broke produce funny vibes, crummy scribes slop and runny
    Like hot honey sticky and tricky like the gasses of molasses a dummy
    A fellow sincere is like the bellows of a deer during
    Rutting time, cutting rhymes, putting many time insuring
    My Lex with Geico Stuff causes brains to swell say what? Pause the pain
    It’s hell, oh well. Mastering words that be plastering nerd plain
    Say what? Need aspirin for your nerves and mainframe?
    Well player take Bayer for headaches hates misled fakes
    I’m a dropper of devastation with proper qualifications great
    Like doctor Dre, I fasten on knife blasting strife then have
    A longer life behead chumps my threads dumped like waste baskets
    Face fantastic pressure can’t measure the treasure the pace is Jurassic
    Like dinosaurs. In contest defeat with clever rap then beat with leather
    Strap hell I’m on streets to endeavor crap.
    When words stress secretaries they need access to libraries
    Like mess in commissaries words can become food that varies
    Even a house attic faces mouse static if not properly maintain
    Shingles ripped like eaten Pringles’ chips leaks as rain bring pain
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep indeed heavy rap freestyle !
    let it clash brutha like dis flow
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADDRAPPER, Wow you have again created a masterpiece of rhyme
    I get exactly what your saying, you the master MC keep bring the sublime



    Great poem you have made
    Now go and seize a great day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    another madd creation
    flow head on....
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gee thanks for the props for real yall
     
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