Black Poetry : Deep Like

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emotions scattered all over the place
    Usually I put pen to paper to dicpher
    But this time it's to hard to begin the trace
    Feeling like I am going 90 mi/hr without a driver
    Butterflies in the stomach like that first crush
    Wanting to scream it all from the Mountain top
    Yet to nervous to move into that kind of rush
    How do you describe that feeling of deep like
    Not quite ready to begin to classify it as love
    Even though your heart has begun that hike
    But you must admit an infatuation it is above
    You can't wait to be in their presence again
    You smile at the mere mention of their name
    Yet you hesitate because it is a familiar refrain
    Slow to leap ahead for fear of it ending the same
    Caught in limbo of euphoria and extreme caution
    Enjoying the moment but pondering final outcome
    What shall deep like bring in tomorrow's manifestation
    What shall truth bearing time show forth and welcome
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa,



    ... Welcome back asimplepoet, its good to be reading you again; excellent write poetess.

    Very profound thoughts:

    Peace In,
     
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    love the flow of this write sis.....
     
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    that time between infatuation and love...between attraction and ...........

    that bubbly, giddy-fresh feeling that inspire greatness within. THANK YOU for the reminder.
     
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