Black Haiku : Deep Like

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's not quite love yet
    Not forever and always yet
    But more than mere like

    Inside of my heart
    Is becoming your new home
    for I'm steps from love

    So I invent words
    To express these new feelings
    I am in "Deep Like"
     
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    LindaChavis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I....

    ...like. I know this feeling
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww...

    Each step bringing you
    closer in like, until you're
    embraced by love's arms
     
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    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like the Sunday morn
    Breeze, Like the arms of a tree
    Gentle Embrace....WE

    See reflections of
    Love's Destiny flow freely
    Creating a Warmth

    A Divine rapture
    of energies making way
    For Eternities


    M.E.
    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Likes of such feelings
    deeper yet not love but felt
    inside da heart of love

    I've yet not known it's
    place of love but the feeling
    to love thee within

    so teach me the way
    from deep like to humble love
    so i may know of
     
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