Black Poetry : ----Deep down----

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  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    ----Deep down----

    triniti424,

    You nailed another one! Deep Down!

     
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    Sometimes we go on automatic pilot, bumping into every wall, getting caught in every crevice. No one can go it all alone. I certainly felt the searing pain in these well expressed lines poetess.
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

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    yes

    figthing alone but STANDING STRONG

    the wall can cave in at times but hey there's hope

    and hope ain't a bad thing

    it could be worse

    lol

    peace

    feeling your fiyah
     
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    Great flow

    Excellent Lady " T "

    Triniti
    You are a powerful poetess.
    I love how you flow.
    You are deep and spellbounding.

    " wasting no time on self revival – some things will just never be the same again "

    No they won't... but you are a survivor.
     
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    Sister Triniti ... see ... poetry like this only provides hard-core evidence ... that i aint no poet!

    You are soooo good !!! :toast:

    It's been a long time since i sat down and had the pleasure of being immersed in your thoughts ...

    Thank You Thank You Thank You for the pleasure !

    Great Work ! :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    amazing how u pin it down to the ....trin awesome write
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much family XOXO

    Thank you Brotha Clyde lol :) You are so uplifting a sister feel like she floatin round u lol :grouphug:

    True indeed sister :) I always know I can get a sincere read from you :) it does the spirit well :) :grouphug:

    LOL word it could most def worse... it could be dem nastee recees pieces you were mentionin in yo piece lol had my face like :10700: lol Just messin with you :) that imagery did make my stomach turn though in that piece of yours :) I aint throw up in my mouth like Khasm though lol Im a thug like that ROFL (yeah right LOL) Thank you for the read brotha :) :grouphug:

    :) Thank you hodee bear :) Just reppn that bay area fever :) :grouphug:

    :blush: awww sister Destee-mae :grouphug: :kiss1: :grouphug: It just feels good to be able to come back home and even with all the high techie gigamaphone changes lolol some things are still the sweet same :) like just being able to unwind roun otha folks who accept my craziness lol :) :grouphug:

    Nah- YOU are the amazing one Rich lol I get exhausted after one comment post to ONE poet LOL let alone my own piece lol thank you for the read :grouphug:
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!


    triniti24,

    Thanks my Friend, and you are floating around, in the Spirit of Sankofa!


     
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    still wit da

    reeses pieces

    hahahahahahahahhhahaa

    :em3300::ref::bullseye::qqb021::poop::bye:
     
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