Black Poetry : deep down it burns…

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See….
    I can say I love you
    But what would it mean?
    To you……..
    Would you change?
    Can you?
    Do you?
    Burning inside…….
    The history we have will
    It fade or will the hurt continue?
    Can you answer?
    Because I don’t know….
    So many years
    What will it be?
    I never release
    ……………….deep
    down it burns…
    My soul
    My heart
    My mind
    Burns……
    I still call out your
    name in the middle
    of the night….
    Tears form a water fall
    As I lay myself down
    trying to save my dreams
    of what we could have been
    but the drama
    the lying
    the stealing of my love….
    Taken my pride
    If I say I love you….
    Where will we end up this time?
    As I cry my soul out
    Wondering….
    Wondering
    Wondering….
    Will it last?
    will we be?
    Can we be?
    Will you even be able to love me
    As I Love you?
    ……………….deep
    down it burns…
    My soul
    My heart
    My mind
    Burns……
    The flame that you lite
    Wont go out….
    For my love was
    pure when it came
    to you…..but you did
    my love wrong….
    My soul
    My heart
    My mind
    Burns……for me
    i have to walk away.....
    Its over for me.....

    A blkangel thang...2004
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep indeed
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like it very nice
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte from start to finish.sometimes its better not to fight for love,u'll only destroy urself in the long run.keep ya head up.much love
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, this is deep - incredible release. wishin you peace, sister
     
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    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOOK AT YOU GETTING ALL DEEP AND STUFF!!!!!!QQ
    YOU BAD!!! :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    YOU BAD!!! :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  7. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes

    this too was deep, lovin you MBA , keep um floE'n
    Nita :heart:
     
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    MZBLKANGEL- First off your name is fitting
    Your flows have a celestial feel to them
    Sometimes it's easier to pick up a spear to fight
    than a white flag to surrender
    then sometimes (like this) vice versa

    VERY TIGHT MY SISTER (but then else what can i expect from you)
    You captured the emotion perfectly :bowdown: :bowdown:

    Peace and love


    *hmmm* I felt like this prior to
    writing "I hate myself"
    amazing
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater...thanks sis much love to you love ya support and love you always show.... :D

    poeticly_yours..glad ya likes :cool:

    sarcasm4eva...thanks for the support :spinstar:

    gempis...thanks... wishin you peace as well:grouphug:

    turtle1...:lol: thanks my brother :blush:

    Nita...just flowing thanks girl..i try to keep it up :angel1:

    twision..thank you for your comments your support is great....
    i likes ya flows as well...thank you again for the love :spinstar:
     
  10. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tite
    what more can i say?

    one
    /antar
     
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