Black Poetry : DEEP BLUES LINE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Theres no blues like mines
    that beats like radiant shine
    disguised on tappin dime
    eloquent spunky all funky
    throbbing da ghetto bumpy

    Sadity blues paranoia of reality
    voices of confusional melody
    camouflaged on chocolated notes
    that wave into a mental stroke
    playing in my head a float

    soaking in the deep blues of morrow
    from the day long depressional sorrow
    differently pathways taken in tune
    because i'm stuck in this blues cocoon
    defines my heart line in cascading flower
    observed fragile yet strong as an tower

    The blues have an hold on me
    from the destruction i see
    and the pain deep within to be free
    ambition high yet the song path
    elude me in despair of the mental tree

    I stand in symphony of emotion
    and from this desorder notion
    of what destory hope and devotion
    the blues note hit on extension
    to exposition of a rocky explosion

    Wings engage angularity line
    blues holding massive sign
    discomfort remain in tyme
    but soon victory will be mine
    from this deep blues line :eek:


    A Dyamondluv Creation
    Nu~wave~Ink~Production
    2005 Da $R....................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are times when the
    blues seem to hit without reason
    some experience this sadness
    due to the change of season
    But sometimes loneliness
    makes a heart feel low
    Or a love you feel deep down in
    your soul, that hesitates to grow
    And try as you may, these blues
    just will not let you go
    Those blues got you so that
    you're not sure what to do or say
    cause you know deep down that life
    isn't supposed to turn out this way
    You pray to the God above for a
    more positive, brighter day
    And the Lord says that when he sends
    you a gift, act upon it, just don't let it lay
    Take these steps and let them steep
    then walk beyond them blues that lie deep
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    at times we all go through this moment in life.....Faith is the key to all things and trying times...

    stand still and let God
    for he who is delighted in Him
    shall He be delighted in you


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    thankz watz that was sweet
    but the blues line weight in deep
    casting destruction that sweep
    yet i'll rise wit my soul to keep
    da blues line ...........................

    thankz Angel as i sleep
    awaken in prayer kneel from my feet
    letting the master in to clear this
    destructional sin and this heavy trend
    from the deep blues line within.............
     
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