Black Poetry : ...deep apprehension.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
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    ok,ok,ok, hollit-
    u took yet anotha of my catch phrases!
    but u didthadamthang with this one.
    i guess when i come back full circle
    i'll have to catch u in the afterlife-
    cause now yo mental's too far gone.
    nice lines SS. u keep the competition
    strong. thanx

    hw
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    swimming in the emotions of this...

    coz we all don' been there when love stepped off...leaving us wondering what to do...which way to turn. THANKS for sharing.:(
     
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    GA,

    I like this here.
    Very nice read. :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN[/B] :heart:
     
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    Oh my!!! It's getting deep up in here.
    Can't wait to see what happens next! ;)
    And the flow...tight as usual!!!! :heart:
     
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    Sunshyne...

    As usual, Lovely flow here Sis!
    What am I going to do wit u!!
    Hmmmmmmmm.....
    Your words always reach out and touch a brutha.
    All I'm a say is continue to Love...
    It's your strength I believe.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes you write things that hits a brother in a spot where all I can say is thank you and I've been there...so

    thank you.


    Verb
     
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    Umm Umm Umm...

    I hope that you're not apprehensive wit me!!! :laugh:

    Nice *** piece of writing per usual Elayne!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanks!


    BigHead. apprehensive wit you?! nah uh! neva dat
    my dear! :D thanks for the read. :heart:

    SGP. ahhh... so i touch you sometimes?? wow... that
    is a compliment of extreme proportions! :heart:

    Rashad. thank you darlin'!! that's all i eva wanted
    people to know... that Love is my strength! i'm glad to
    know somebody final-ly sees me! :heart:

    Dani. you think you cain't wait!! i'm ova here shakin'
    in my shoes!! :) thanks lil sis... for EVERY thing! :heart:

    CoCo. glad you enjoyed it! thanks for the read! :)

    B. no! Thank YOU... for feelin' & hearing! you know
    how much i appreciate you?? (i'll tell you lata! :wink: )

    GaBoi. dis ain't no competition!! besides dat i cain't
    even try to compete wit chou!! :D itsallLove. :heart:

    Sherrie. inhale... exhale... inhale... see ma! i'm tryin'
    to rememba to breeve!! :D i love you!! :heart:
     
  10. MsBerry_98

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    Dayuuuumm Sunny E...

    I feel this one on sooo many levels. TKO as usual. You slay me.

    :heart: in' ya!!
     
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