Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Mar 20, 2002.
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u took yet anotha of my catch phrases!
but u didthadamthang with this one.
i guess when i come back full circle
i'll have to catch u in the afterlife-
cause now yo mental's too far gone.
nice lines SS. u keep the competition
swimming in the emotions of this...
coz we all don' been there when love stepped off...leaving us wondering what to do...which way to turn. THANKS for sharing.
I like this here.
Very nice read.
Poetically Turn'd Out!
Oh my!!! It's getting deep up in here.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
And the flow...tight as usual!!!!
As usual, Lovely flow here Sis!
What am I going to do wit u!!
Your words always reach out and touch a brutha.
All I'm a say is continue to Love...
It's your strength I believe.
sometimes you write things that hits a brother in a spot where all I can say is thank you and I've been there...so
Umm Umm Umm...
I hope that you're not apprehensive wit me!!!
Nice *** piece of writing per usual Elayne!
BigHead. apprehensive wit you?! nah uh! neva dat
my dear! thanks for the read.
SGP. ahhh... so i touch you sometimes?? wow... that
is a compliment of extreme proportions!
Rashad. thank you darlin'!! that's all i eva wanted
people to know... that Love is my strength! i'm glad to
know somebody final-ly sees me!
Dani. you think you cain't wait!! i'm ova here shakin'
in my shoes!! thanks lil sis... for EVERY thing!
CoCo. glad you enjoyed it! thanks for the read!
B. no! Thank YOU... for feelin' & hearing! you know
how much i appreciate you?? (i'll tell you lata! )
GaBoi. dis ain't no competition!! besides dat i cain't
even try to compete wit chou!! itsallLove.
Sherrie. inhale... exhale... inhale... see ma! i'm tryin'
to rememba to breeve!! i love you!!
Dayuuuumm Sunny E...
I feel this one on sooo many levels. TKO as usual. You slay me.
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