Quiet Poetry Lounge : dedication

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by luvNwords, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. luvNwords

    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i was a child i thought as a child
    my behavior was childlike
    but what else could you expect from a child
    now that i'm grown i've learned somethings
    from people and some i've learned on my own
    one word that i've recently added is dedication
    i was always able to speak it but
    i recently found out i didnt know what it meant
    a good many years wondering i spent
    only to find out that what i was searching so
    desperately for i lacked myself
    but now that i've gained it
    words can not express
    how i feel inside now that i've been blessed
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very lovely scribe here
    let the ink continue
     
  3. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are lots of things we can't fully understand till we are "grown" detication being one of them.
    "i was always able to speak it but
    i recently found out i didnt know what it meant"
    I really like this line.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow
    posed well
    from the inside
    to outside to lay sweet
     
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