Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Apr 5, 2004.
you are right dear, ...
how far a touch is felt...no one really knows
I really liked where you took this...it was heartfelt.
luv comming at ya...Tswana
indeed u scribe the real motions of a friend
i love how u did this here
very nice write
what else can i say
i likes this
So, so true, we never really know what we mean to another life, so wonderfully posed.
i felt this a lot it was deep
Actually it felt quite sad to write it...and I think it came from an undestanding that it may be possible that we may not see each other again...something niether of us know for sure.
We are all here but for the twinkling of an eye...and yet we take so much around us for granted, especially ourselves and those we come in touch with.
As I sat to write this...I thought to myself, suppose the shoe had been on the other foot ? It actually pained me to write this, because with it came the realization of his reality and pain.
You're right, we may not know what we mean...but isn't it good to mean something and to know that you mattered. If you mattered, then so did they.
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