Black Poetry : Dedicated to you..My Grandmother...R.I.P.

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  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Grandmother,
    I know it has been awhile...... (begans to cry)..... I miss you so much. I never ever thought life was going to be so hard on me. I have learned so much. One lesson that I have learned is not to cheat love. Love is a very manipulative game. It starts to consume you and your heart. Maybe not love..... but lust and infatuation. Then comes temptations..... Yes, I remember when you told me... 'Child, temptations are just the Devil's invites to his lair.' Grandmother, why does temptation feel so good though? I know they are wrong but they feel so right. Well.... used to feel right. I want you to know that I have turn my life over to God. I just want some soul completion. Lately, my life has been very 'below par'. I guess it's the Lord testing my faith to him but I am faithful..... maybe doubtful.... I mean, Grandmother, when can stop suffering? I hurt so much, so much.... but it's like everyday, something brand new develops in my life... At times, I want to give up but I don't because I know you would be very upset with me for giving up... so I won't, for you, I won't let society's 'poison' consume me.... This hatred eat me alive... I won't, I can't...... Grandmother, just tell me that you are still by my side
    .....Grandmother, I want feel your touch on my face...... I miss you so much, and I love you........ See you soon,
    Your granddaughter
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so beautifully and sad surely ya cry is heard
    she's with u beside u
     
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    feelin dis here deep down in my soul sistah
     
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    i feel ur pain...
    this is touchin
    and very deep
    for those who have been though
    alost...i just lost my grandmother
     
  5. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys........
     
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    shes right in here>:heart::)
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks.....
     
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    this was beautiful and felt... and swt-t is right...that's where
    she always is...in your heart...
     
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    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you.....
     
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    she is close to u right now,1,she hears u and knows ur pain.
    much love,
    -story
     
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