Black Poetry : Dedicated to the lost souls(Diamond in the dirt)

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everyone wants to ba a phenomenal woman
    Most women don't know the definition of being the head of the table
    Still with my flaws and bad calls I'm saught after like gold in California mines
    My outter beauty matched up to some around me
    Distinguished features and an inner beauty out of this world
    I applaud God for making me different a child for his work and wonderful blessings
    Set apart from the rest of these women,who are they?
    If they have no ambitious dreams or goals for their useless lives
    In strip clubs and on gritty street corners
    Ask,"What you need,that'll cost 400 bucks for a blow."
    Some men seek the weakness of these females to hide their own fears of a strong black woman like me.
    They dominate and shadow these lifeless beings as is they really are strong warriors such as a black zorro.
    The light-hearted seek a mans love,touch,scent,money,mind,and sense of security to define and make themselves whole.
    Not realizing that the sense of self love is stronger than any man or woman's prescence.
    Unwed mothers weep at night for the shallow gap formed in their heart.
    Producing a child new to this world thoughtless without a voice of it's own.
    Not knowing the father,lost because they aren't a good example to their unborn.
    Pushed down the stairs,couldn't see the door knob is what she says after losing her mind and trying to destroy anothers.
    Trying to fit in the crowd these ladies or should I say chicken heads.
    Like clones,all in European weave and Korean freshly manicured plastic five dollars and ninety-nine cent nails.
    Want to be in Nelly's video"I'm ugly with a big butt"
    A.k.a "TipDrill".
    Not listening to the signs or acknowledging the voices of the wise.
    Mindlessly jumping into hoops without rhythm.
    Losing balance and all self worth
    Try being a light to someone else.
    Shimmer brighter than a light over the blackend sea.
    Yelling,jumping,and girating out of control to be noticed.
    When what's going through the predators mind is,"She's easy I can pop that little cooch tonight after I leave my baby mama's house over there by trixies."
    It's sad how you think that you're a prize to every niggah with a gold cap on their front tooth.
    With loud pipes and 24-inch chrome wheels.
    A diamond clustered earpiece
    Gucci'd up from head to toe
    Hair shiny and slick as yaky synthetic fibers
    Accent as rich and crisp as French haitian men in Nawlins(New Orleans),Louisiana.
    When they just as pretty and ignorant as you................
    Love yourself first before you try to please someone else.
    Be yourself before you try to fit into somebody elses pretty baby blue pumps.
    Get the taste of Grey Goose off your tongue and the twisted grime for your hair.
    Before you taste the sweet Brandy and feel the true texture of your kinks.
    Stand up for what you know is right
    Don't settle for less than what you deserve
    God has a plan for you and it's your choice rather you accept or turn away
    Keep it real Princess and you'll see for sure outcomes.
    Stay right like a man would say wanting you to be his wife.
    Save one....don't throw away your life.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, you made your point here, be true to yourself first, be complete in yourself first, I like the way you put this together.
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you I just felt I had to say something about all the negativity around me I'm just happy I got my priorities str8 and thanx again.
     
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    indeed u expressed it well and yes i see all yours intact
    we live in so much myth and negativity well done
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you i just wish some ppl would take the time to listen
     
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    SensualReality...
    I can start off by breaking down the words, ..."SENSUAL" and "REALITY"...but given the fact that you're on a reality venture I am pleasingly compelled to reply to your most beautiful poem...
    It makes me feel warm inside to see such wonderful work and Intelligence from such a young but inspiring soul, ...yes you have inspired me to great heights.
    Thank you for restoring my faith in our future. Thank you for being what every mother/guardian wants to see in all our young ones. And there are so many like yourself out there...you may have gave some a reality check. Beleive this: SOMEONE OUT THERE HEARD YOU. You are a Goddess, a Queen to behold and a treasure to all.
    Please keep up the good job you're doing ...and I'll continue to look for your work in the future.
    You have my upmost respect and I am more than proud to give you a bow...
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    very deep teaching
    in your flow
    wonderful :)
    very very nice
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU ALL very much and the bow part....I'm speechless(tear) :hot: :hot:
     
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    man, you're an excellent compounding, extrodinary,inspiring writer that poem got straight to da point I'm really feeling it
     
  10. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww thank you girl it makes me feel good to know someone the same age as me feelin my work much love to ya :luvv:
     
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