Black Poetry : dedicated to my boyee!!

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're my boy 4 life...
    and when we both have wives and kids
    l'll always remember the things we did.....

    l love you like a brother
    forget that..
    you are my brother and like you there is no other....

    you have felt my pain
    l felt yours
    we use to skip class and smoke black n mild behind close doors....

    we use to share our fantasies of girls we would like to dig
    playin' spades-
    they never caught us renig.....

    peeps thought we looked alike and sounded alike
    and it was always a compliment to me
    as they would see our pure handsomeness and killer good looks
    we're stayin' in the books
    no more girls' thighs getting shook...

    l'm your son, your father, your boy, your sidekick

    and thanx for prayin' with me
    prayin' for me in times good and bad...

    l know they say men don't look right expressin' their views to one another
    but you're my brother and my twin
    l love you thick and thin...
    b/c of you l've won against so much sin

    and when you read this and don't feel me, then read it again and again and again...


    the end.

    man you know l had to freestyle this one short b/c if it were written l would not have stopped.
    l had to drop this piece of heart on the boards for all to see.
    we've always beaten the odds and you- man l'm so proud of you..
    xtremely proud.
    you have taught me how and even your dad how to be a man..
    l know you will say "man that's how l feel about you" but l beat you to this punch bruh :D

    infinite love.


    dedicated to my right wing- twin vision "twision" and hopefully he will begin to grace us on the board..

    words won't ever do me justice, peep.
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dat's my boyee!!
     
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    i read this earlier

    real solid

    :toast:

    pd
     
  4. elayne.

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    awwww... now this... this was some real love ****
    befitting a Don! :D isn't it nice when you have
    some one in your life who you don't mind going
    thru with?? mmm mmm mmm... but i have to admit
    i was kinda shocked that you could love someone
    else as much as you loove me! :wink:

    itsnfinite, chile.

    elayne.
     
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