Black Poetry : Dedicated to Him

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Mar 26, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wondering

    Is it so hard to say you need me?
    Your touch says what you lips don't.
    Is it so hard to say you want me?
    Your body says what your mouth won't.
    When will you tell me that you love me?
    Your touch tells me what you can never seem to say.
    I am waiting for the day I no longer have to wonder.






     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed thy will confess da loveth of heart
    the wait is ova after reading this sweet release
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smiles and giggles when I get a compliment from such a passionette poet as yourself.
    Thanks for the luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome now open as he so cometh unto u wit confession
    of love to embrace
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that giirl, that girl, that girl
    I think I'm in love :heart: :blush:
    Yet another impressive piece
    Will it ever stop?
    Hope not!

    This one was tight because of how concise it was
    coupled with the depth of the message
    I could literally see you laying beside "Him"
    Thinking about these things
    That's the power of poetry
    Flow on sis.

    Peace and love
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you :thanks: :thanks: :blush:
    You are making me blush.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hopefully he will hear and answer you. I agree with twision, the conciseness of this, was the beauty.
     
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