Black Poetry : Decsions

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a warm summer breeze

    he blows through her mind.

    Stirring up thoughts and visions

    Touching and carressing her intellect and

    heart.

    What was it about this man that made her want to

    run.

    To him and from him at the same time.

    In him there is a sense of comfort and nervous excitement

    Her heart wants to sit still and bask in the glow of all that is him

    but her head says there is no guarantees

    in life there are no guarantees.

    Does she trust her heart or use her head?

    Does she stay and feel or run to saftey?

    These questions run through her head as

    she looks into the eyes that hold all the answers

    and she realizes there is no place she'd rather be.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed that very place i lone to see ........just beautiful sis
     
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    full of emotion i like this poet.......:terrific:
     
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    Ooh, I hate it when I feel like that! You have so succinctly and poignantly expressed these emotions and mental waverings for so many!
     
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    thatgirl:
    Enjoyed the read. I can feel you on this...


    What was it about this man that made her want to
    run. To him and from him at the same time.



    Much Luv
     
  6. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cherry Blossom:
    Thank you so much for the feed back. I appreciate the love.
    4Ever:
    THank you so much. I love that line myself.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece so captures those feelings of uncertainty, amid feelings of love. Beautiful.
     
  8. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz,
    THank you for the feedback
     
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    Girrrrrrrrrrrrrrl LOL

    I have been here b4 whew lol

    I really enjoyed the emotional effect of this piece sister :)