Black Poetry : Declaration

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, May 22, 2001.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remembered watching her when she was young
    Thinking to myself, what a cute little girl
    Witnessing her transformation into a young adult
    For that’s when she captured my heart
    Yet what would others say?
    For though not far apart in age
    That stage of our lives made it seem somehow wrong
    Time has passed, life moved on
    Until one day
    Revelations were revealed
    And buried feeling of love returned
    Overcoming
    Overwhelming
    Yet I don’t fight it
    But admit it
    Knowing that
    We have grown stronger
    Life’s plans may have been denied
    But not my love
    Because my love for you is eternal…
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    this melts my heart

    so tender

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Afridancr

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    Bishop

    this Declaration of eternal love...
    sweet and sentimental:love:
     
  4. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee

    I'm glad it does...But let me shut up..
    Afri

    Thanks for the love girl.
     
  5. Amun-Ra

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    As Always

    Fromm the lighthouse--the flow comes strong--I loved this one--it had a special essence that is hard to capture in words--Ra
     
  6. GQ

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    Nice Bish - real nice!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BRUTHA EXTREME U CAME RAW AND SWEET
    DES HERE IS PURE ESSENCE..........LOVE :heart:
     
  8. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amun the Master teacher himself

    I thank you for the kind words...means much coming from you man...

    GQ

    Just trying to be like you man...

    $$Rich$$

    man you know love is what the Bishop is all about...Thanks
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel the

    rays of the Lighthouse on this one.
     
  10. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man that sounds familiar!
    sweet flow.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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