Black Poetry : Declaration of Love

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wonder if you truly know how much I think of thee
    Walking hand and hand throughout all eternity
    Two souls though now we may be separated
    Yet a new love has been created
    What have you done to me?
    What magic have you cast over me?
    Beautiful you are, yet your spirit is what captured my soul
    I truly wonder what the future holds
    Thinking of you as I lay awake at night
    Wondering if I could ever be your shining Knight
    A woman in great demand
    Yet men just don’t seem to understand
    That what you desire is beyond the physical
    for true intimacy is spiritual
    You’re not looking simply for someone to love you in the night
    You’re looking for a king in which your soul can delight
    To fill that empty void, to earn a trust that once was lost
    By those who didn’t know that when it comes to true love there is a cost
    Most men are not willing to sacrifice
    They treat their relationship like a roll of the dice
    But I stand here arms open wide
    Letting you know that if you ever need me, I’m willing to pay the price



    :heart:
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    wow Bishop !

    this is beautiful
    is this why they call you ...
    Love's Favorite Son?

    very nice

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BISHOP THIS BE TIGHT SHITTT!
    TYME FOR SOME REAL LOVE
     
  4. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee....I'll let you ne the judge of that....:wink:


    Thanks Rich!! after all I learned from you.....you be DA MAN!!!
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BISHOP...

    wow!!... this was fantastic!!

    this is one declaration that should
    definitely be treasured & honored
    for all tyme... i loved it!!

    Peace...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!
    I must say, im taken back by this one...
    it's really beautiful..

    8th!
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this is tight with that reality check
    love is skin deep truly...

    this is off the globe!! peace

    from the serenity
    j'hiah
     
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    when is come to love in da declaration way
    just stroll the sea of love to da lighthouse of
    BISHOP !!!
    love this piece great classic flow ...............
     
  9. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop..!

    this was a "phenomenal" piece of work.
    For true love does indeed come with a price
    that at one time or anouther we all will willingly pay.
    This left me almost speechless...
    So by all means, "KEEP EM COMIN"...1
     
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    Spoken lyk a real man
    who understands
    love and not lust
    keepin it real i trust.
     
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