Black Poetry : Declaration of Love - Repost

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wonder if you truly know how much I think of thee
    Walking hand and hand throughout all eternity
    Two souls though now we may be separated
    Yet a new love has been created
    What have you done to me?
    What magic have you cast over me?
    Beautiful you are, yet your spirit is what captured my soul
    I truly wonder what the future holds
    Thinking of you as I lay awake at night
    Wondering if I could ever be your shining Knight
    A woman in great demand
    Yet men just don’t seem to understand
    That what you desire is beyond the physical
    for true intimacy is spiritual
    You’re not looking simply for someone to love you in the night
    You’re looking for a king in which your soul can delight
    To fill that empty void, to earn a trust that once was lost
    By those who didn’t know that when it comes to true love there is a cost
    Most men are not willing to sacrifice
    They treat their relationship like a roll of the dice
    But I stand here arms open wide
    Letting you know that if you ever need me, I’m willing to pay the price
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mhmm... that's like right!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bring it to dem Bishop sho ya open heart of love
    dis here was tyght scribing
     
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    Bishop.. I know you wrote this a while ago, but I am new to this family and I decided to check out some flows from a lil while ago...
    U bought tears to my eyes... It's like u know what I'm feeling inside and what I desire from a man who is real. Ur words jumped right off that page and straight into my heart.......
    Beautiful poem my new found friend...
    God Bless u and I'm looking 4 more from such a creative and precious poet!!!!
    1 Love....
     
  5. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin' ya, Sista Diimond...

    ...ditto for this peace.

    Truly stunning in its beauty. Love it.
     
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