Poetry Critiques : Decipher my Dreams III

Prizefighter16

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Decipher My Dream III


Had a dream Martin Luther King and I took a long walk
Told him my goals he understood them and we talked and we talk
About things as trivial as the light of sun’s position
As it gracefully acted in the soulful rendition
Of color intermission
For skin color’s commission
I love the view of beautiful dark chocolate faces in my vision

And the clouds
In my dreams
It looks so different when I look at it now
That’s cause I can see my reflection when I look at it now
Don’t know how
But when I looked at it, I ain’t see no flaw
As if God was right next to me,
Embracing me, lovingly
Telling me not to worry
Stay in heaven, there’s no hurry
Cause everything was alright
I stay there to bathe in this new freedom light
But as I’m ready to take the freedom flight
My mind races through me and awakens me with spite
Telling me there’s not time for dreams,
I still have to fight
For true freedom

And there is the end
The end of all my dreams
No more time for dreams
Gotta come back to reality
As if someone just pulled on my gravity
Sayin no sorry
No fantasy for you.
Keep dreamin like that
And your dream won’t come true
Actions are the only thing left to do

I know it’s not possible to make all of this true
But what does my dream mean for you?
Do you just see a bunch of words?
Or can you understand the spiritual verbs

Do you think you could decipher this dream for me?
By helping this world to be a little more free?
You might think I’m crazy
You may just want to sedate me
But I can’t ignore this pain that is bleeding through me
So my subconscious created this full dream remedy
Until I am well
Until I’ll be ready
To begin to play the tune of the freedom melody
Blast it throughout the entire country
I’ll say
No the spangled banner ain’t playing today
Who wants to listen to a bunch of lies anyway?
I think I’ll call it the peace RE-Birthday
I’m thinkin’ I’ll schedule it up in May
As in May you hear my peace address
May you listen to my soul expressed?
Read the dream written by the reality press
See the dream of all come to reality, yet.
But there’s still a fraction of this dream that I don’t get

Do you know what this all means?
Can you help me to decipher my dreams?​


peace family...thanks for readin it,lol, if you do
 

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