Black Poetry : DECIEVED

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DECIEVED

    I see but I can’t believe
    The stories you tell,
    The things you perceive
    You speak of truth
    Yet you still deceive
    Telling lies of ancient history

    But who are you to say
    Who we are
    See you most have life confused
    Cause when you look at us
    You must get conscrewed
    But in reality, who is really what? Hmmm

    See we are people just like you
    We bleed the same blood
    And breath the same air
    So why the hell
    is white America so unfair?

    You give us a dime
    But quick to take back nine
    Leaving us a penny
    A penny without any sense
    And yet you wonder
    Why we do the things that we do
    Come on now dude, come get a clue
    Cause our government
    Still wants us to be confussed

    See, we live in the times of Babylon
    Where we make decisions without thought
    Mental thoughts of suicide
    Cause our government wants us hypnotized
    See it’s time for us to relies
    That without education
    There will be no peace
    In race relations

    So what are we contemplating
    Is it the struggle
    of our own enabisions
    Or just jealousy
    Of the next man?

    Look around you
    And what do you see
    Now step back
    Relax and think about
    That man you hate
    And see how much
    You two really do relate

    Isn’t it a shame
    That in this day and age
    You and I
    still can't even relate
    See that ****
    That **** sadness me
    And I wonder
    is that what
    keeps us blind?
     
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    mind opening to the reality of truth
    this piece express that in this day age
    and the shame of what is , so blind
    i feel this joint more then u know ......

    tyte scribing poet !
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats whats up thanks.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats whats up, thanks brah...
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preach on my bratha, derr was so much truth in that piece
    i mean thats how i be thinkin n feelin, dis white america want us 2 be blind
    but we are stronger cuz we c the s**t datr dey do
    flo on wit nonstop my bratha of truths


    blackluv and bp
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you, but its about educating each other and not destroying each other. Its not about the haterate of white people or their haterate its about looking at each other as humans.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true dat my bratha
    i feel ya


    blackluv and bp
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this papi like your style always keep them flo's coming i see a poet of the week in the making. if i have the right to say.:smooch:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, I appriciate the love ma. But I am just a simple person who writes from the heart. If I get it I appriciate and be honered if I don't then hey I would just be glad I mad some people think....
     
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