Black Poetry : Decieved

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see but I can’t believe
    The stories you tell,
    The things you perceive
    You speak of truth
    Yet you still deceive
    Telling lies of ancient history

    But who are you to say
    Who we are
    See. we...
    We are people just like you :donttell:
    We bleed the same blood
    And breath the same air
    So why the hell is white America so unfair?

    You give us a dime
    But quick to take back nine
    Leaving us a penny
    Penny without any thought

    And yet you wonder
    why we do what we do
    Come on now dude,
    go get a clue
    Cause our government
    still claims that we’re confused

    It’s like I said before I see but I can’t believe
    The stories you tell, and the things you perceive
    You speak of truth, yet you still deceive
    And still telling lies of ancient history.


    some sites I know you all might enjoy
    B. Buchanon Thats my mans and them from Brickcity Newark, NJ...
    Michael Guinn The man to see if you ever are in the Dallas/Ft. Worth area. Make sure to hit him up....

    by the way I host a poetry spot in Lawton, Oklahoma.
    come by we have Taalam Acey with us on August 24, 2005. It's gonna be a hot show....

    For info on The Verbal High hit me up at [email protected]
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was on the money, yep, they lie like a rug, and do it well. Keep these gems coming.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a message given in grace of this unjust race
    Thankz for sharing and the sites many will visit
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowing with a message flow head on i enjoyed this scribe...Angel
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for showing love
     
  6. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really...

    This piece is what the Black are living there!It's not really obvious,but when taking time you can see how true is this poem!Wish that Black will have more rights than today one day.
    Thanks for sharing it with us
     
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    I give you a thumbs up.....
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The funny part about this is I am not even black. I am puerto rican but we all still face the same bs. :jam:
     
  9. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We all should just focus on the positive things that we as people do instead of the negative.
     
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