Quiet Poetry Lounge : Deception

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, Nov 9, 2006.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Facades of beauty suffocate my purity
    Evasive jealousy stips innocence
    No symphonies or harmonious bliss
    Just esophoric scenes
    Disgusting grunge
    Forgotten songs, a muse no longer heard
    Revolutionary disaster, lost cause
    A life sold
    Where does this end?
    History only serves to brainwash
    Unknown stories
    No one wants to listen
    It's easier to adorn a mask
    Ancestral wisdom permeates carnally
    Beauty facades fading out redemption
    What happened to the soul?

    *I'm back y'all!
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back Sahara Heart

    Very nice flow.
    I like your reference to the mask often wore.
    Never loose your positive soul energy.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome home and this deception is felt
    happy ya back drippin ink again miss ya !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If to nobody else, to thine own self be true. Always great reading you.
     
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