Black Poetry : Deception & Sins Of A Man

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Help with a birth
    Bound by a dream
    Mind starts to want
    Needing your love
    Trying to get away
    Run from my fears
    Gods always here
    Gotta keep him hear
    Want for the love
    Need for the love
    Beg for the love
    Plead for the love
    Try to find the will
    Do I have to live
    This is the real
    Time after time
    Deaths by myside
    Why would I lie
    Go through the pain
    Want for the need
    Work all the jobs
    Children to feed
    They lean on me
    They needing me
    Cry when they starve
    Tears in my eyes
    Checks kiss good bye
    Bills got to pay
    Need another day
    Please one more day
    Struggled for so long
    Came out the dirt
    Bought me a home
    King of my throne
    Wife shows me love
    Cooks and I clean
    Can this be
    This life
    This the life for me
    Sometimes I fall
    Sometimes I sigh
    I have cheated
    Hurts like hell
    If I tell her
    Its all over so
    What do i do?
    Loose all i have
    Loose both my kids
    Cars and the crib
    Child support
    Custody courts
    What do i do?
    Lord I need support
    But I stay strong
    Mind of a man
    Mind built this land
    Mind is the strength
    Lord is my gift
    Lord keep me here
    Lord I need you here
    This is the mind
    Mind this is
    This is the mind
    Lord can you save me from my sins???

    Much love Poets!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said , surely the answer will be yes !
     
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    Such a wonderful Lord he is, for he is a forgiving Lord. I hear ya poet.
     
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    yes i feel ya on this. i dont know why men think they can do everything on their own. i thank my heavenly father everyday for allowing me to see another day. for all that he done for me. so i say flow on tantrum.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes we need the Lord
    In everything we do and say
    With out him i dont know what I would do
    Thank you for the Love Poets
     
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    dang poet
    this is hot man
    you have to be fair to yourself
    the family you know how to handle that
    don't let the questions brake you down
    just come to terms with what the present situation creates
    and can you live with it
    but most of all
    can you live with yourself?

    and would exposing this destroy what you have

    good questions

    DSS
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Brother Soja
    For the love and support
    Much Love 2 All My Destee poets
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beutiful tantrum very beutiful snap snap!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love Plat
    I really do appreciate when a poet takes the time
    To show others love
     
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    Sometimes I fall
    Sometimes I sigh
    I have cheated
    Hurts like hell
    If I tell her
    Its all over so
    What do i do?
    Loose all i have
    Loose both my kids
    Cars and the crib
    Child support
    Custody courts
    What do i do?
    Lord I need support
    But I stay strong
    Mind of a man
    Mind built this land
    Mind is the strength
    Lord is my gift
    Lord keep me here
    Lord I need you here
    This is the mind
    Mind this is
    This is the mind
    Lord can you save me from my sins???


    my fave part right there!!!Lork knows i can relate....liked the way you flipped it poet.....nice dawgie,niiice.......



    holla 1
     
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