Black Poetry : Deception: Beware Young Girls

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I awoke this morning holding only myself.
    Last night's dream vanished in a sullen mist
    of disappointment and youthful arrogance
    upon discovering that young and old both can play.
    Utility creates deception and unknowing pawns
    for the charming chessboard of whetted appetites,
    where prey pretends defenselessness convincingly
    to capture the huntress without revealing why,
    leaving the predator perplexed and puzzled
    unaware the game is concluded, completed
    without knowledge or understanding of
    what took place, in this place or in her space
    while she leaves bewildered and baffled
    feeling slightly worn but not knowing why.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HUMMMMMMMM!! AS I SIT HERE DAYDREAMMIN'
    I WONDER WHY! COULD SHE BE OF ...HUMMMMM!
    OR WAS IT THAT .....HUMMMMMMMM!!
    IN THOUGHTS...
     
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    Ra there u go again
    yo flow is a bomb baby
    what is it u can't do!?
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    still got a few tricks left

    the old dude still knows!

    Ra
     
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    Whoa...

    What could I possibly say? This piece is so deep. I had to read it a few times. Here is a piece that goes far beyond the surface of the words; very thorough...
     
  6. Amun-Ra

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    Fire in the furnace

    still burns the unsuspecting and leaves them wondering--whay happened--they only were ollowed to think they were in charge--Ra
     
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    weaving between not only the words
    but the letters and the spaces

    wondering ...

    very nice Amun-Ra

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    but of course

    of course she was pissed--anytime the player gets played--didn't know she was being played--but that's the way it goes--sooner or later we run into that one who can out ******** the bullshitter--Ra
     
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    RA,

    man you got me :lol: over here. i like the way the playa got played. this is :hot: but i think you already know that.

    gotta go. Palmolive wants me to go back to tha store. (see you at the lodge)
     
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    Don'tmention that name

    this is the first time I've been out of the house without supervision in almost two weeks--of course she got me wearing one of those electronic ankle bracelets, but she forgot--I put it on my bad leg and left it over at a friends house--she probably thinks I'm over there helping fixing his car----sssshhh--don't let it out--cause now I'm on the road again--quietly--Ra

    PS--the rest of y'all better keep quiet--me and dnommo got this covered--don't start no **** and there won't be no ****--Maybeline cookin' upsome cornbrad and greens tonight and think she going to get some. I guess I'll have to go home and soldier for some of that good cookig, but right now I'm going to drink my jick, talk that smack and parlay all these lovely young gals! Whooowee!

    :jumping: :jumping: :laugh: :peace:
     
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