Black Poetry : Debunk 'da Crunk

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Feb 20, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every generation has its crunk
    Every institutution we debunk
    Conservative @ss Freak Foundation
    Here's your stiff administration ~

    Hip-Hop Nation legislation
    Mandates that we...
    Kill the NOISE
    Say that with conviction vixen
    Revolution's (paranoid)

    Britches falling don't define US
    That's butt claustrophobic smoke
    Spandex world I'm near bombastic
    Futuristic...
    Ain't no joke!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :D
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can think of better laws to be enforced but under the bush administration logic isnt used they'd rather tackle fashion sense than common sense. great topic for your piece. nice work
     
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    My Lady, I am most honored by your appearance here.
     
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    this was phat bruh !
    expressed well to the point
     
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    Thousands being killed in an ongoing war that should never have been, that we can tolerate. Drooping pants showing off drawers, that we can't? How twisted is that? Lovin how you see the world with your pen. Flow on brotha.
     
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    Wow loved this expression ... very straight forward. I like that!
     
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    now this was off it very nicely posed keep bringing it..love reading you
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Ya'll

    Come on and Debunk 'da Crunk now baby!

    Get off your bump,,, Yeah :baby:
     
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    Of course, the knucklehead got his priorities in all the wrong order, but you showed us how bettah than anyone else coulda. :kiss:
     
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    OMG, lol...each line had the TKO
    with an unbelievably clever and quickwitted style
    this made me laugh a little but most of all...

    It made me think...

    "Debunk the Crunk"....is a brilliant concept
    If we ever needed a revolution
    "We need it now" and it can't, as you say...
    be paranoid.


    How I do, LOVE your thought process...

    Fabulous work here!
     
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