Black Poetry : Debating to leave...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da1whoownslife, Aug 25, 2003.

  1. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes.... I love you
    but I don't want to hurt you.
    I just need to find me
    and yet, my mind runs free.
    Naw.... I am not cheating on you girl
    but just trying to keep it real.
    I wish I had your composure and mind,
    but at this time and moment, you can't be mine.
    I feel that life has it out for me,
    but people need to let me be.
    Oh yes....... I love you
    but I can't bring you down too.
    Many girls come into the light,
    and in those, many want to stay the night.
    Most girls are hoes,
    also, can i say foes.......
    They often say, "Girl let me break your back in,"
    but never saying, "Girl, of course, I am here to the end."
    They want this magic tongue,
    but you know....you will always be #1.
    Oh yes.... I love you,
    but right now...my mind can't stay true.
    Whenever you need me to bring you back to reality,
    better believe...I will forfill every fanasty.
    I will make you fiend for this
    often reminding you about our used to be "bliss".
    I don't want to leave,
    but I don't want to be the one to decieve.
    Oh yes... I love you,
    and no matter in the end...I am your down to earth "boo."
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Naw.... I am not cheating on you girl
    but just trying to keep it real.
    I wish I had your composure and mind,
    but at this time and moment, you can't be mine.

    Feelin ya scribe...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya ...as u walk away
    best thing don't wanna play
    yes the love is real
    so these wordz speak da deal

    i feel ya ..............
     
  4. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys for replyin.......
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on the debate
    it can play the mind
    nice flow
    Peace
     
  6. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish all break up were worded so nicely. Sweet but real and honest
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice. Flow

    That pull you feel.
    Is it real.
    To make you spill your drink.
    A chance to be with someone who needs you?
    Why do we chase the elusive unknown.
    Sitting on our throne.

    In discontent.

    Saying things we never meant to say.
    Tearing away at the heart.

    "I feel that life has it out for me,
    but people need to let me be. "

    Be who. Be what?
    Since we can only look back,
    why end the relation we seek and lack.
    Until your sure, the pull is real
    You have to just be you.

    Reflect
     
  9. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys for replying..........
     
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