Quiet Poetry Lounge : Death's Song

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  1. Onichika

    Onichika Active Member MEMBER

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    Death’s Song

    Pain in slow motion linger forever,
    Back tracked seach’n the lever,
    To pin point the pricks,
    Multiple stab wounds got me sick,
    Blood flows the hill slippery n slick,
    Sprint but destined to slip,
    Pleas go def and pride rips,
    Dripping shame an maintain,
    study on a lane change,
    But alas you refrain,(why)
    from last shlt is the same,
    So fvck the sky don't rain,
    Ain't all part of the game,
    So I let her sing to me,
    Bearing stone gifts beautifully,
    From harm forever free,
    Always with wifey eternity,
    No more trials let me be,
    Never again to see,
    So much Burning debris,
    While waters free.

     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im just so lost for words right now. so touching flow on poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa!!
    dis was deep and felt in my spirit
    wow ! all i can say ....................
     
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    Let the cleansing water flow and cleanse away the pain
    Let it cleanse ya soul from unwanted memories and stain
    Let it cleanse every fear that resides
    Let it cleanse your heavy heart and mind
    Let it purify your heart and soul
    Gently luving you back so more...:kiss2:

    Feeling this poet.... got me stirred up in spirit.... thank u D.S.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely expressed poet
    Very deep and well spoken
    Much love flow on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i remember this one
     
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