Black Poetry : death row's mile

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  1. MORE

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    i sent u roses on your birthday
    at the time
    it was all i could do
    you went on a trip
    and by the time u got back
    everything was confused...

    i had planned an evening
    but u had something to do
    so my candlewax wasted
    dinner went cold
    dinner for two

    but still in my mind
    i was seeking a way
    to get you a nice present
    for your birthday

    but so much time passed
    then an argument had flaired
    and before u knew it
    it was up in the air

    emotions and chaos
    clouded my intentions
    i tried to avoid it
    to keep on my mission

    but it hurt me so bad
    when u finally showed up
    a week after your birthday
    still expecting stuff

    i felt if it really mattered
    then you would've been there
    the night u came back
    to the night i had prepared

    now you wanted sunglasses
    and wanted a phone
    okay i owe u them sunglasses
    the ones that i broke

    but i can't even get them
    cause sometimes we don't speak
    and although i feel strongly
    my will is getting weak

    so i wish i could pull
    the moon from the sky
    place it in your lap
    and look good in your eyes

    but ur still much to angry
    resentful and hurt
    over something i can't change
    even though this could work

    so i can't get your present
    now what would i get?
    since your heart is filled with torment
    and unwarranted regrets

    and i want to get u something
    but would it be worthwhile?
    or would u still crucify me
    and make me walk
    death rows mile
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    More, the emotion in this piece, the many complications
    of relationships, love, pain, regret....things u can't change
    I hear you and I feel you on this piece! Truly

    Much luv,
    angeli
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow very felt compassionate flow
     
  4. MORE

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    thanks yall, yah, this piece was true indeed:confused: :confused: :kiss:
     
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