Black Poetry : Death Of A Vagina:3 Act ForePLAY

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  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Death Of A Vagina: 3 Act ForePLAY

    The last time
    I had sex
    I took my vagina
    With me

    I looked deeply
    Into his eyes
    His penis stayed
    But the love left

    Right in the middle
    Of Act 3

    And
    I was forced
    To climax
    My own soliloquy

    While
    My vagina was
    Trying to massage
    "A Mid Summer Night's Dream"

    Trying
    So hard
    To re-capture
    The love
    That use to be

    And
    The penis was
    Responding to me
    Without his permission

    And his eyes
    Left to battle
    The stiff-ness
    Of submission

    All around me
    I could feel
    The casualties of
    This Sexual Revolution

    But
    Sex is
    No real solution

    To war

    Afterwards
    I read his Constitution
    His Declaration of Independence
    Said:

    "This doesn't change anything"

    And everything changed
    For me

    Then

    My vagina
    Killed herself
    At the end
    Of
    Act 3

    And

    I buried her
    Underneath
    The uterus roots

    At the base

    Of my
    Womanhood's
    Tree


    *Vagina Chronicles*

    Hunter
    All Rights Reserved
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you, my dear sustuh

    captured this sooo very graphically... I'm always floored by your ability to bring it with such vivid colors ~ the kind I can FEEL...the ones that leap off this one-dimensional screen and shake me at my foundation.

    ONLY you could speak this plainly, and make it beautiful ~ pain. My emotions are running rampant as I type. You know we shall re-visit this scribe.

    Your menses; this ink.... and the purification of the uterus is at hand.

    Flow


    a
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The secretions of your "vaginal verses" have left me all wet. My Canadian queen this epic you have blessed this site with is outstanding. Incredible.

    one love.blak

    ?what part of Canada ya' from?
     
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    Dayummm

    Your work always seem to amaze...I wasn't expecting this yet in a sense i was. You are true to your words and your words are true to you. In my book that makes you a great poety. I am truly inspired....
     
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    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***snapping fingers***

    it s truly a pleasure knowing you
    just invite me to the book signing

    *we gonna make it*
     
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    Hunter~

    Doin' it, and doin' it, and doin' it well!

    1 :heart: sista friend!
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HUNTER.....

    ****!!... it's so hard to type from this bowing position!

    & i don't know if i'll be able to get up again...
    not as long as You continue to post!! :) ooohhh... my sister!
    this piece is speaking to me. i don't think there's a person
    who reads it (poet or poetess) who hasn't "been there/done dat" so to speak.
    ...let me get outta here while i can!

    thank you for sharing this. continue to write the words Queen!

    Peace&Love.
    SunShyne~
     
  8. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again family

    Thank-you for supporting the private world of my vagina.
    Like all the other privates that lie between legs...my vagina
    simply wants peace on earth ;)

    *humbled-by-your-words*
     
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