Quiet Poetry Lounge : Death Mixed With Dreams...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jun 27, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tonight i cry
    tomorrow i could die
    i haven't even tried
    to fully live my life
    i have so many dreams
    about the career i sing
    but tonight i can just cry
    cuz tomorrow i could die
    but at least i've fulfilled one dream
    and i love him more than anything...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the dream of love , out cast death
    in one's arm surely blessed
    many more dreams to fulfill
    let me say dis be real
    ya notions of sleepy thoughts
    is da dream
    but awaken u capture victory
    again & again
    let it flow on sistah !
     
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    you founded love, you have love,
    something a few of us will never know .....
    it is a wonderful blessing,
    i am happy for you that you have founded love...
    Peace
     
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    Lovely, this poem is so emotionally evoking, reading this I am completely empathic...but you captured it well -

    but at least i've fulfilled one dream
    and i love him more than anything...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u vision is a new beginning
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the beautiful words everybody:)..........they mean so much
     
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    oooh, that is so bee-you-tiful. At least you know what it feels like to beloved...I envy you. Everytime time I think I am loved it turns out to be nonsense.

    P.S, yo're not going anywhere, you are going to be just fine, remember the dreamer told you!!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwwwww thanks girl.....one day you will find true love...believe me i know....thanks for the encouragement:)
     
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    ya humble soul is blessed from above
    things gonna be alright .....get well soon sistah
     
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    Beautifully written and wonderfully felt.
    God has you here for a purpose...
    And one of the many is to bless us with your talent.
    Keep flowin ma.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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