Black Poetry : ~Death do us part~

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Saying yes,
    As I look in your eyes
    I can see the future
    As wide as the ocean blue
    Far as the sea runs
    For I never gave up
    Nor did you…on the first meeting
    Was to make us strong for
    what was to come…..and
    For we stand here today stronger
    Then the wind…. as we past all the storms
    To become one within Gods eyes
    Saying I do,
    On this day. I stand beside you
    And take your hand
    as I give my heart completely
    and speak my soul to you
    You’re my best friend and lover
    And I love you
    No one can make me feel
    The colors that you bring
    For our love have taken form
    Within new heights we reach
    Sharing our dreams
    Living our lives
    To death do us part
    I was made for thee
    To love and cherish thee
    As we make this union true
    I finally feel complete
    Within I feel the rush
    No longer have to search
    You have giving so much to me
    My King of divines my strength
    My protector soul mate of my soul
    My essence is you……
    On this day…I vow to be
    Faithful and honest
    love you to my best
    No matter what it takes
    As we have our ups and downs
    I got your back…for you never
    have to stand alone again
    What is now mine I give to thee
    Overjoyed is the best I can say
    In sickness or health I am with you
    As I open up my mind…this day
    My heart flows in peace….
    as we bring our families as one
    With you by my side
    My actions will show
    What my heart wants to say..
    For I am forever yours
    as I give you my hand
    I shall take your ring….
    as it symbolize
    A continuous circle
    of an Unbreakable Reunion of
    Two spirits
    Two souls
    Two hearts….
    That now is one…
    within the blessings insight
    Of GOD…
    along with family and friends
    I shall say I do
    over and over again
    on this day
    and days to come
    to death do us part
    I am yours
    COMPLETELY
    (C) 2004
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow Angel...
    no hammer for this piece...
    It was beautiful beyond words...what a lucky man, ...what a lucky you. I feel so warm right now. *sighing* ...
    I want a front row seat...cause I love to see "love" ...being shared.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    Beautiful...simply beatiful. :D

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with us.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    open mindful flow so sweet
    this was awesomely beautiful
    and felt ......wow!!!
     
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    This was a lovely vow. Beautiful flow.
     
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    What a beautiful dedication to a lucky man be he now or later he wil or is a lucky man and this is a wondereful drop. ​




    Scorpio Style baby u done it up with ya Virgo self! :toast:
     
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    naw no hamma this time sis..:lol: well you know you got front seat :D
    thanks for gracing my scribe with love...Peace...Angel
     
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    thank you Moneyyyyyyyyyyy..for your continous support and love.....Angel
     
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    wow!!!! glad you enjoyed this scribe
    open mindful to release the heart to love
    thank you for blessing it
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    thanks scorp for the love on dis piece
    Peace
    Angel
     
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