Black Poetry : Dear, Sweet Brother of mine

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Growin up…you
    was always there to
    catch my fall..only a year apart…
    but we were closer then any other…
    then I start catchin you….
    hoping you will
    turn your ways
    and stop going against thy wind…
    got you to go to church once…
    you even settled down for a year..
    out of that year..i got a wonderful
    nephew and i held
    ya hand..but you turned once more..
    coz you was wild..but this time
    i don’t know how to fix it….
    and here I am trying..but
    its like fightin as if I am blind
    I am only your little sister….
    If I could make earth move..
    And the storm stop flooding
    The path….
    Just to have you home….i would..but…
    I cant fix it…
    Now i think back
    when nawna passed
    we cried together..and you held me
    then grandie and once more we
    cried together but part of you had left…
    but promising you will stay always..
    then that morning
    when momma passed..
    you left me to….
    but you came back…when grandpa passed..
    they promise I could see you
    but they brought you before anyone knew…
    because they where moving you again…
    but I got that letter..I love you too…
    now your
    leaving me again..soon
    don’t know when
    but one of these mornings
    you be in a better place…hope ya
    stay out of trouble….you can be a handful
    ya know…but see this time I cant
    catch you…your on your on but I will
    hold your hand each step of the way…..
    until your last breath…my heart is covered
    my soul is dark..for my
    every breath is coming slow..for
    You may not come home this time
    As my world start spinning…
    my stomach twisting…I cant fix it this time…
    this is a road you must cross with out me
    and I don’t know how to deal..for the
    tears pour from my eyes…
    that one day you be gone..
    we cry now but what happens
    when your gone?
    I Love you....
    Babygirl
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    a heart felt scribe this was...
    let it out...neva bottle up your true feelings
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep and well felt from the solo heart u pose
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I shed tears with U.

    Let it out.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sweet family...
    khasm...thank you for your words...

    $$Rich$$ indeed i pose this in solo
    from my heart deep as i feel this pain...

    PositiveMindset...thank you
     
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    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWWWW, this was so, so touching....and I can kinda feel where you are coming from....thanks for the words.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart cries for you!

    This is what ya call between a rock and a hard place.
    I feel so deeply for you. I offer you the peace that
    passes understanding when your burdens are to heavy
    to bear...take it to God and leave it there.

    Blessings On Your House! :grouphug:
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW

    this is truly deep. I love it.
     
  9. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so deep
    when a brother weep
    in the presence of blood
    a sister and little at that
    he understands you,matta a fact
    he feels pain same as you
    he remembers the blood and battlescars
    the loss of lives brought him this far
    be there for him
    regardless of past sins
    he needs you in his life
    help him repent for the strife
    be there for his little man
    its now his woman needs a hand
    be strong for him and his
    and his love i promise this.
     
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    oh, my sweet friend, I ache for you. :grouphug: I wish I could give you a real, in-person hug. you are in my thoughts and prayers, with much love.
     
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